[RDS-WHOIS2-RT] REPORT URGENT: Implementation paragraph for R3.1

[Lisa Phifer]

Team,

On behalf of Alan, please be advised that the implementation timeframe for
R3.1 has been clarified as follows.

*Implementation:*

*This recommendation should ideally be implemented post-GDPR
implementation, but no later than [TBD months] after the recommendation is
adopted. The implementation should begin once it is moderately clear how
GDPR will be addressed with relation to gTLD RDS (WHOIS). Should the
implementation of this recommendation be deferred past FY2020, the then
existing RDS (WHOIS)-related parts of the ICANN web site must be amended to
cross-link the various sections on the RDS (WHOIS) portal, ICANN
Contractual Compliance, Registrar and ICANN Learn.*


During copy edits, it was noticed that the first sentence still contained a
placeholder [TBD months] and could be seen as duplicating and perhaps even
conflicting with the second sentence. To resolve this, Alan has proposed
deleting the first sentence and letting the second sentence alone address
implementation timeframe.


Because this is more substantive than a copy edit, Alan asked that the RT
be advised of this change. Any objection to this change should be raised to
the RT list ASAP but no later than 29 August 23.59 UTC.


Regards,

Lisa
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