[RDS-WHOIS2-RT] REPORT URGENT: Updated draft for final read-through

[Lisa Phifer]

Team,

Attached please find an updated 28 August draft of the RT's report, in
redline and clean versions.

This draft reflects the report content adopted during Monday's plenary
call. You will find edits corresponding to agreements made in Monday's call
marked in the redline with my initials "LAP."

This draft also contains three substantive changes proposed by Alan, marked
in the redline with his initials "AG." Those changes (1) resolve the Rec2
action item, (2) delete a sentence from R3.1 Implementation, and (3) add a
Bylaws paragraph to the Exec Summary.

Finally, this draft contains non-substantive copy edits (marked in the
redline with "ED") for consistency in acronyms, terminology, format,
cross-referencing to sections by number, and so forth. The bibliography
appendix has now also been populated from each subgroup's referenced
documents list.

Those of you wishing to give the draft one last look before it gets
submitted for publication, please do so using the attached CLEAN version.
If you spot any substantive errors, please send them to the full RT mailing
list no later than 29 August 23.59 UTC.

Thanks everyone -
Lisa
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