[RDS-WHOIS2-RT] ICANN62 RDS-WHOIS2 Engagement Session - Slides

[Alan Greenberg]

I've reviewed the slides and in addition the 
input that Jean-Baptiste listed below, I have the following recommendations:

Slide 7: Promotes consumer trust - delete "in 
gTLD domain names". That is not in the Bylaws.

Slide 17: Spell out BWG since this is the first occurrence.

Slide 17: Sub-bullets 2 and 3 of the 2nd major 
bullet (It is interpreted... and While these ...) 
seem to be sub-bullets of the first (From the mandate...)

Slide 21: Draft Recommendation really does not 
makes sense in light of the Temp Specification 
and planned Expedited PDP. I suggest we delete it 
from the slides and discuss it at a future meeting.

Slide 29: Define ARS here (and can delete definition slide 36).

Slide 36:  4th bullet defining WDRP is really 
just a statement of known fact (and known to the 
last WHOIS RT). I suggest we delete it here.

Slide 37: Rec# 6 Rationale - Do we mean the ARS 
IMPLEMENTATION is on-going as opposed to the ARS on-going?


At 25/06/2018 11:36 AM, Jean-Baptiste Deroulez wrote:

>Dear review team members,
>
>In preparation for your engagement session this 
>Thursday 28 June at 17:00-18:30 (EST), please 
>find attached the latest draft version of the slide deck.
>
>Please note that slides 18 (WHOIS1 Rec #1 – 
>Strategic Priority), 21 (WHOIS1 Rec # 2 – 
>Siingle WHOIS Policy), and 60 (Objective 3: Law 
>Enforcement Needs) are still awaiting input or 
>confirmation from rapporteurs. Thank you for looking into these.
>
>Kind regards,
>
>Jean-Baptiste
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