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<p class="MsoPlainText">Dear Alan,</p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText">The most recent version of the ToR was distributed with materials for the 27 Nov meeting: http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/rds-whois2-rt/2017-November/000230.html. The latest and correct version is now available on the
<a href="https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=64084100">wiki</a>, and was forwarded to the review team ahead of today’s plenary call, including the changes you listed below.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">My apologies for the inconvenience caused,</p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText">Jean-Baptiste<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">On 12/8/17, 5:34 AM, "RDS-WHOIS2-RT on behalf of Alan Greenberg" <rds-whois2-rt-bounces@icann.org on behalf of alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> The latest version on the Wiki is v10, but that does not seem to
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<p class="MsoPlainText"> incorporate the last set of agreed upon changes.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> Also, I note two additional errors:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText"> 1. Under Mission & Scope in the paragraph on the limited scope
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<p class="MsoPlainText"> proposal, the phrase "by the ICANN organization" should be deleted.
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<p class="MsoPlainText"> ICANN Organization now means just staff, and in fact, I was the prime
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<p class="MsoPlainText"> author (working with Margie).<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> 2. The version of the proposal pointed to in the ToR and in the RDS
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<p class="MsoPlainText"> Review Guidance document is incorrect. The final version is
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<p class="MsoPlainText"> v4-4-11.16 and is attached to this e-mail (it corrects a critical typo).<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText"> Alan<o:p></o:p></p>
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