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    <p>I agree with Cathrins changes and have none to offer myself.<br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Am 29.05.2018 um 14:50 schrieb SUN
      Lili:<br>
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            style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D">It looks fine, no
            further comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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            style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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            <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt"
                  lang="EN-US">From:</span></b><span
                style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US"> RDS-WHOIS2-RT
                [<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="mailto:rds-whois2-rt-bounces@icann.org">mailto:rds-whois2-rt-bounces@icann.org</a>]
                <b>On Behalf Of </b><a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:Cathrin.BAUER-BULST@ec.europa.eu">Cathrin.BAUER-BULST@ec.europa.eu</a><br>
                <b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, 29 May, 2018 2:06 PM<br>
                <b>To:</b> <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:jean-baptiste.deroulez@icann.org">jean-baptiste.deroulez@icann.org</a>;
                <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:rds-whois2-rt@icann.org">rds-whois2-rt@icann.org</a><br>
                <b>Subject:</b> Re: [RDS-WHOIS2-RT] REVIEW NEEDED:
                ICANN62 Engagement Session Description<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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        <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
            style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D" lang="EN-GB">Dear
            all,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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            style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D" lang="EN-GB"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
            style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D" lang="EN-GB">Some
            small edits proposed in the text below (in bold and red) to
            clarify 1) the "this" in the second sentence and 2) that
            this engagement session is one opportunity to provide
            feedback (i.e., there will be more) just to avoid
            misunderstanding. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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            style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D" lang="EN-GB"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
            style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D" lang="EN-GB">All best<o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
            style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D" lang="EN-GB">Cathrin<o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
            style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D" lang="EN-GB"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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                  style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif"
                  lang="EN-US">From:</span></b><span
                style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif"
                lang="EN-US"> RDS-WHOIS2-RT [<a
                  href="mailto:rds-whois2-rt-bounces@icann.org"
                  moz-do-not-send="true">mailto:rds-whois2-rt-bounces@icann.org</a>]
                <b>On Behalf Of </b>Jean-Baptiste Deroulez<br>
                <b>Sent:</b> Monday, May 28, 2018 10:15 PM<br>
                <b>To:</b> RDS WHOIS2-RT List<br>
                <b>Subject:</b> [RDS-WHOIS2-RT] REVIEW NEEDED: ICANN62
                Engagement Session Description<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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            lang="EN-GB"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span
            style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US">Dear Review Team
            members,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span
            style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span
            style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US">Following the action
            item identified today on plenary call
            <a href="https://community.icann.org/x/MgMFBQ"
              moz-do-not-send="true">#28</a>, please review the below
            updated ICANN62 engagement session description and confirm
            by
            <b><u>tomorrow, Tuesday 29 May 2018 23:59 UTC</u></b>
            whether you have any edits/comments.
            <o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span
            style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><i><span
              style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US">Join a discussion
              with the Registration Directory Service Review team
              (RDS-WHOIS2).
              <o:p></o:p></span></i></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span
            style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><i><span
              style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US">The Registration
              Directory Service Review, formerly known as "WHOIS"
              (RDS-WHOIS2) is mandated by the ICANN Bylaws</span></i><b><span
              style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D" lang="EN-US">.</span></b><b><s><span
                style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US">, this</span></s></b><b><span
              style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#C00000" lang="EN-US">The
              scope of its work</span></b><i><span
              style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US"> includes assessing
              how the recommendations of the first WHOIS Review were
              carried out, as well as assessing the effectiveness of the
              gTLD registry directory service and whether its
              implementation meets the legitimate needs of law
              enforcement, promoting consumer trust and safeguarding
              registrant data. The RDS-WHOIS2 Review Team will update
              the community on its findings to date and seek input on
              its findings as well as address any questions pertaining
              to its scope and work plan. This is
            </span></i><b><s><span style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US">your</span></s></b><b><span
              style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US">
              <span style="color:#C00000">one</span><span
                style="color:#1F497D"> </span>opportunity
              <span style="color:#C00000">for you</span></span></b><i><span
              style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#C00000" lang="EN-US">
            </span></i><i><span style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US">to
              provide input into the RDS-WHOIS2 work. </span></i><span
            style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><i><span
              style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></i></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><i><span
              style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US">For more
              information, please visit the RDS-WHOIS2 wiki
              <a
                href="https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/RDS-WHOIS2+Review/"
                moz-do-not-send="true">https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/RDS-WHOIS2+Review/</a>.
            </span></i><span style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><i><span
              style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></i></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><i><span
              style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US">Learn more about
              opportunities to participate in RDS-WHOIS2 work at:
              <a
                href="https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/Observers"
                moz-do-not-send="true">https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/Observers</a>.
            </span></i><span style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span
            style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span
            style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span
            style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US">In absence of
            comments/edits, the ICANN62 engagement session description
            will be considered approved.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span
            style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span
            style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black" lang="EN-US">Kind
            regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span
            style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black" lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span
            style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black" lang="EN-US">Jean-Baptiste</span><span
            lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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