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How about ending with: <font color="#0000FF">This is your opportunity to
provide input to the RDS-WHOIS2 Review Team prior to the finalization of
their Draft Report.<br><br>
</font>That emphasizes what stage we are at and supports our request to
be removed from the Public Comment.<br><br>
Alan<br><br>
At 29/05/2018 02:06 AM, Cathrin.BAUER-BULST@ec.europa.eu wrote:<br><br>
<blockquote type=cite class=cite cite="">Dear all,<br>
<br>
Some small edits proposed in the text below (in bold and red) to clarify
1) the "this" in the second sentence and 2) that this
engagement session is one opportunity to provide feedback (i.e., there
will be more) just to avoid misunderstanding. <br>
<br>
All best<br>
Cathrin<br>
<br>
<b>From:</b> RDS-WHOIS2-RT
[<a href="mailto:rds-whois2-rt-bounces@icann.org" eudora="autourl">
mailto:rds-whois2-rt-bounces@icann.org</a>] <b>On Behalf Of
</b>Jean-Baptiste Deroulez<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, May 28, 2018 10:15 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> RDS WHOIS2-RT List<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [RDS-WHOIS2-RT] REVIEW NEEDED: ICANN62 Engagement Session
Description<br>
<br>
Dear Review Team members,<br>
<br>
Following the action item identified today on plenary call
<a href="https://community.icann.org/x/MgMFBQ">#28</a>, please review the
below updated ICANN62 engagement session description and confirm by
<b><u>tomorrow, Tuesday 29 May 2018 23:59 UTC</u></b> whether you have
any edits/comments. <br>
<br>
<i>Join a discussion with the Registration Directory Service Review team
(RDS-WHOIS2). <br>
</i> <br>
<i>The Registration Directory Service Review, formerly known as
"WHOIS" (RDS-WHOIS2) is mandated by the ICANN
Bylaws</i><b>.<s>, this</s>The scope of its work</b><i> includes
assessing how the recommendations of the first WHOIS Review were carried
out, as well as assessing the effectiveness of the gTLD registry
directory service and whether its implementation meets the legitimate
needs of law enforcement, promoting consumer trust and safeguarding
registrant data. The RDS-WHOIS2 Review Team will update the community on
its findings to date and seek input on its findings as well as address
any questions pertaining to its scope and work plan. This is
</i><b><s>your</s> one opportunity for you</b><i> to provide input into
the RDS-WHOIS2 work. <br>
<br>
For more information, please visit the RDS-WHOIS2 wiki
<a href="https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/RDS-WHOIS2+Review/">
https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/RDS-WHOIS2+Review/</a>. <br>
<br>
Learn more about opportunities to participate in RDS-WHOIS2 work at:
<a href="https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/Observers">
https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/Observers</a>. <br>
</i> <br>
<br>
In absence of comments/edits, the ICANN62 engagement session description
will be considered approved.<br>
<br>
Kind regards,<br>
<br>
Jean-Baptiste<br>
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