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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D">Dear all,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D">Some small edits proposed in the text below (in bold and red) to clarify 1) the "this" in the second sentence and 2) that this engagement session is one opportunity to provide feedback (i.e.,
there will be more) just to avoid misunderstanding. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D">All best<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D">Cathrin<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> RDS-WHOIS2-RT [mailto:rds-whois2-rt-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Jean-Baptiste Deroulez<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, May 28, 2018 10:15 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> RDS WHOIS2-RT List<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [RDS-WHOIS2-RT] REVIEW NEEDED: ICANN62 Engagement Session Description<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear Review Team members,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Following the action item identified today on plenary call
<a href="https://community.icann.org/x/MgMFBQ">#28</a>, please review the below updated ICANN62 engagement session description and confirm by
<b><u>tomorrow, Tuesday 29 May 2018 23:59 UTC</u></b> whether you have any edits/comments.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Join a discussion with the Registration Directory Service Review team (RDS-WHOIS2).
<o:p></o:p></span></i></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">The Registration Directory Service Review, formerly known as "WHOIS" (RDS-WHOIS2) is mandated by the ICANN Bylaws</span></i><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D">.</span></b><b><s><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">,
this</span></s></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#C00000">The scope of its work</span></b><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"> includes assessing how the recommendations of the first WHOIS Review were carried out, as well as
assessing the effectiveness of the gTLD registry directory service and whether its implementation meets the legitimate needs of law enforcement, promoting consumer trust and safeguarding registrant data. The RDS-WHOIS2 Review Team will update the community
on its findings to date and seek input on its findings as well as address any questions pertaining to its scope and work plan. This is
</span></i><b><s><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">your</span></s></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">
<span style="color:#C00000">one</span><span style="color:#1F497D"> </span>opportunity
<span style="color:#C00000">for you</span></span></b><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#C00000">
</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">to provide input into the RDS-WHOIS2 work. </span></i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></i></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">For more information, please visit the RDS-WHOIS2 wiki
<a href="https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/RDS-WHOIS2+Review/">https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/RDS-WHOIS2+Review/</a>.
</span></i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></i></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Learn more about opportunities to participate in RDS-WHOIS2 work at:
<a href="https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/Observers">https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/Observers</a>.
</span></i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">In absence of comments/edits, the ICANN62 engagement session description will be considered approved.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Jean-Baptiste</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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