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    <p>Hi Susan,</p>

    <p>thank you for your comments, I understand the issue better now.

      We can just point that out in the presentation. <br>

    </p>

    <p>Regarding the grandfathered domains I explained that in the mail

      I sent yesterday evening. The 2013 date is actually irrelevant to

      the question of whether a domain is a grandfathered domain or not,

      the only relevant date is when the registrar it is registered

      through signed the new RAA. So if it was with registrar X all the

      time and registrar X only switched to the new RAA in 2016, that is

      the relevant date for that domain. <br>

    </p>

    There is also a significant trend that can be seen in the various

    ARS reports that shows that grandfathered domains are reducing at a

    fast pace, exactly what was forseen by the parties to the 2013 RAA.

    For more on this, I also point to yesterdays mail.<br>

    <br>

    For the other points, I will try to submit my proposed edits

    tomorrow. <br>

    <br>

    Best,<br>

    Volker<br>

    <br>

    <br>

    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Am 22.06.2018 um 18:22 schrieb Susan

      Kawaguchi:<br>

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cite="mid:CAJjzonGjN7ApO19VgTrCo5FAy9MjwwpN_v-4pbxJrR_=KZO7tQ@mail.gmail.com">

      <div dir="ltr">Hi Volker, 

        <div><br>

        </div>

        <div>Please see my responses in red below </div>

        <div class="gmail_extra"><br>

          <div class="gmail_quote">On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 9:07 AM,

            Volker Greimann <span dir="ltr"><<a

                href="mailto:vgreimann@key-systems.net" target="_blank"

                moz-do-not-send="true">vgreimann@key-systems.net</a>></span>

            wrote:<br>

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0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-style:solid;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">

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                <p>One comment regarding the second bullet on page 4:</p>

                <p>The latest ARS report has just over 30%, not 40%. We

                  should update this accordingly. Also "not required to

                  adhere to the 2013 RAA" is not entirely correct as

                  only certain aspects of it would not apply.<br>

                </p>

              </div>

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            <div><font color="#ff0000">These slides were based on the

                review and analysis of the materials previous to the

                recent report.  I have not had time to read the latest

                ARS report and will not before the meeting. If you would

                like to add that into the slides as a note I am fine

                with that but if we change the slide to remove the 40%

                we would need to do that to the full report and I do not

                have time to do that until after the meeting. </font> </div>

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                <p> </p>

                <p>This comment also applies to bullet 3 on page 5.

                  Also, "registered before 2013" is factually incorrect

                  as grandfathered domains could be newly registered

                  even this year as there is still one registrar under

                  the 2009 RAA. <br>

                </p>

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            <div><font color="#ff0000">I do not agree with that can

                provide more detail and analysis on this point? </font> </div>

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                <p> </p>

                <p>Page : I cannot support draft rec number two, as I

                  detailed in an earlier email on this topic.</p>

              </div>

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            <div> <font color="#ff0000">Please note your objection in

                the slide.  I attempted to note the level of consensus

                including your objection. </font></div>

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                <p>Draft Rec 3 makes no sense and should be rewritten. <font

                    color="#ff0000">Please provide proposed edits</font><br>

                </p>

                <p>Draft Re 7 notes my opposition, but not the reasons

                  behind it. </p>

              </div>

            </blockquote>

            <div> <font color="#ff0000">Please enter your reasoning into

                the slide. </font></div>

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                <p>Volker<br>

                </p>

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                <div class="gmail-m_-19079591367629048moz-cite-prefix">Am

                  22.06.2018 um 04:10 schrieb Lisa Phifer:<br>

                </div>

                <blockquote type="cite"> Thanks Susan for this

                  confirmation. <br>

                  <br>

                  Your subgroup consensus notations will be folded into

                  the master slide deck now.<br>

                  <br>

                  Best, Lisa<br>

                  <br>

                  <br>

                  At 06:36 PM 6/21/2018, Susan Kawaguchi wrote:<br>

                  <blockquote type="cite"

                    class="gmail-m_-19079591367629048cite">Hello All,Â <br>

                    <br>

                    I have reviewed the slides and they look great.Â  I

                    have also Â indicated a preliminary level of

                    consensus for each recommendation.Â <br>

                    <br>

                    Susan<br>

                    <br>

                    On Mon, Jun 18, 2018 at 5:13 PM, Lisa Phifer <<a

                      href="mailto:lisa@corecom.com" target="_blank"

                      moz-do-not-send="true">lisa@corecom.com</a>>

                    wrote:<br>

                    <dl>

                      <dd>Susan,<br>

                        <br>

                      </dd>

                      <dd>Attached are updated slides for the Compliance

                        section of the ICANN62 engagement slide deck,

                        reflecting the recommendations in the subgroup

                        report distributed on 15 June.<br>

                        <br>

                      </dd>

                      <dd>Please review to confirm these slides reflect

                        the Compliance subgroup's work and flag any

                        recommendations that have not yet been fully

                        agreed upon by subgroup members. As discussed in

                        today's plenary call, rapporteur edits to their

                        subgroup's slides are requested no later than

                        15.00 UTC Wednesday.<br>

                        <br>

                      </dd>

                      <dd>Regards,<br>

                      </dd>

                      <dd>Lisa<br>

                        <br>

                        <br>

                      </dd>

                      <dd>At 07:18 AM 6/15/2018, Susan Kawaguchi wrote:<br>

                        <dl>

                          <dd>Hello All,<br>

                            <br>

                          </dd>

                          <dd>I have updated the Compliance report for

                            subgroup 4.<br>

                            <br>

                          </dd>

                          <dd>Please see attached.<br>

                            <br>

                          </dd>

                          <dd>Susan<br>

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