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Alan and all,<br><br>
Attached is an updated slide deck which incorporates Alan's edits
below.<br><br>
Note the change to slide 21, which now states: "Subgroup is
reviewing its draft recommendation in light of the recently-adopted
Temporary Specification and proposed Expedited PDP on RDS." This
deferral for later discussion supercedes our request for Carlton's
input/confirmation on slide 21.<br><br>
Rapporteur input is still needed on two slides: 18 (<b>WHOIS1 Rec #1 –
Strategic Priority</b>) and 60 (<b>Objective 3: Law Enforcement
Needs</b>).<br><br>
Leadership approval to submit this slide deck (including any further
edits) is needed by Wednesday noon local time.<br><br>
Best, Lisa<br><br>
<br>
At 09:13 PM 6/25/2018, Alan Greenberg wrote:<br>
<blockquote type=cite class=cite cite="">I've reviewed the slides and in
addition the input that Jean-Baptiste listed below, I have the following
recommendations:<br><br>
Slide 7: Promotes consumer trust - delete "in gTLD domain
names". That is not in the Bylaws.<br><br>
Slide 17: Spell out BWG since this is the first occurrence.<br><br>
Slide 17: Sub-bullets 2 and 3 of the 2nd major bullet (It is
interpreted... and While these ...) seem to be sub-bullets of the first
(From the mandate...)<br><br>
Slide 21: Draft Recommendation really does not makes sense in light of
the Temp Specification and planned Expedited PDP. I suggest we delete it
from the slides and discuss it at a future meeting.<br><br>
Slide 29: Define ARS here (and can delete definition slide 36).<br><br>
Slide 36: 4th bullet defining WDRP is really just a statement of
known fact (and known to the last WHOIS RT). I suggest we delete it
here.<br><br>
Slide 37: Rec# 6 Rationale - Do we mean the ARS IMPLEMENTATION is
on-going as opposed to the ARS on-going?<br><br>
<br>
At 25/06/2018 11:36 AM, Jean-Baptiste Deroulez wrote:<br><br>
<blockquote type=cite class=cite cite="">Dear review team members,<br>
<br>
In preparation for your engagement session this <u>Thursday 28 June at
17:00-18:30 (EST</u>), please find attached the latest draft version of
the slide deck.<br>
<br>
Please note that slides 18 (<b>WHOIS1 Rec #1 – Strategic Priority</b>),
21 (<b>WHOIS1 Rec # 2 – Siingle WHOIS Policy</b>), and 60 (<b>Objective
3: Law Enforcement Needs</b>) are still awaiting input or confirmation
from rapporteurs. Thank you for looking into these.<br>
<br>
Kind regards,<br>
<br>
Jean-Baptiste</blockquote>
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