<div dir="ltr">Dear all,<div><br></div><div>A reminder that the deadline to raise comments on the RT's draft report is fast approaching. Here for your convenience are the relevant links:</div><div><br></div><div>Draft Report, as posted for review on 17 August</div><div><a href="https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/64084100/RDS%20-%20Draft%20Report%20%20v1.8%2017%20August.docx">https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/64084100/RDS%20-%20Draft%20Report%20%20v1.8%2017%20August.docx</a></div><div><br></div><div>Section 1.2, Recommendations List, including 20 August plenary call edits</div><div><a href="http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/rds-whois2-rt/attachments/20180820/e00fe677/RDS-UpdatedDraftRecs-v1.920August-0001.docx">http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/rds-whois2-rt/attachments/20180820/e00fe677/RDS-UpdatedDraftRecs-v1.920August-0001.docx</a></div><div><br></div><div>Sections 9.4 & 5, ICANN Bylaws, updated issue/recommendation per plenary call</div><div><a href="http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/rds-whois2-rt/attachments/20180820/788eca6e/ActionItemResponse-BY1-0001.docx" style="white-space:pre-wrap">http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/rds-whois2-rt/attachments/20180820/788eca6e/ActionItemResponse-BY1-0001.docx</a></div><div><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);white-space:pre-wrap"><br></span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);white-space:pre-wrap">Please raise any substantive concerns you may have on recommendations, findings, and other content to the full RT mailing list ASAP to allow time for team review. The latest possible date to send comments is 26 August. Submitted comments are to be resolved on Monday's plenary call.</span><br></div><div><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);white-space:pre-wrap"><br></span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);white-space:pre-wrap">Regards,</span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);white-space:pre-wrap">Lisa</span></div><div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr">---------- Forwarded message ---------<br>From: <strong class="gmail_sendername" dir="auto">Lisa Phifer</strong> <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:lisa@corecom.com" target="_blank">lisa@corecom.com</a>></span><br>Date: Fri, Aug 17, 2018 at 1:38 PM<br>Subject: Fwd: [RDS-WHOIS2-RT] Consolidated Draft Report 17 August<br>To: <<a href="mailto:lisaphifer@gmail.com" target="_blank">lisaphifer@gmail.com</a>><br></div><br><br>
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Date: Fri, 17 Aug 2018 10:46:28 -0600<br>
Subject: [RDS-WHOIS2-RT] Consolidated Draft Report 17 August<br>
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Dear Review Team,<br>
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Attached you will find a consolidated draft RDS-WHOIS2 review report for
your consideration, in Word and PDF formats.<br>
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As noted in email sent by Alice earlier today, please review this
consolidated draft and raise any substantive concerns you may have on
recommendations, findings, and other content to the full RT mailing list
<b>ASAP and no later than 26 August COB.<br>
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You will note that this consolidated draft does not contain redlines. If
you wish to see redlined edits made since 30 July, please refer to the
associated subgroup report posted on that subgroup’s wiki page. This
consolidated draft also includes copy-edits for consistency and grammar.
If you feel that a copy-edit accidentally changed the intent of any text
in your subgroup’s report, please flag that in comments on the
consolidated draft. If you wish to make comments in redline form, please
be sure to comment against the attached consolidated draft v1.8 17 August
and not any prior version.<br>
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Finally, thanks all for your timely delivery of the many subgroup inputs
now incorporated into this draft. Thanks to your efforts, we’re now
entering the final stretch of our roadmap to public comment.<br>
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Best, Lisa<br><br>
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