<html><head><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body dir="auto"><div>Alan - I was recommending to make only few changes and wasn't recommending reviewing whole sections. It's a Google doc feature to color/signal a whole text section if one makes a comment related to a small part of this section. </div><div id="AppleMailSignature"><br></div><div id="AppleMailSignature">We're in agreement!</div><div id="AppleMailSignature">Erika <br><br>Sent from my iPhone</div><div><br>On Aug 23, 2018, at 4:27 AM, Alan Greenberg <<a href="mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca">alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca</a>> wrote:<br><br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div>
Thanks Erika. I've incorporated your changes. I have not attempted to
rewrite the larger sections you drew attention to. There just is not
enough time to do that now, and the Exec Summ will be subject to
significant revision for the final report. I did make a few small changes
though.<br><br>
The revised version, and I hope FINAL for this report, is
attached.<br><br>
Alan<br><br>
At 22/08/2018 02:23 PM, Erika Mann wrote:<br>
<blockquote type="cite" class="cite" cite="">Hi Alan, hi Lisa - <br><br>
I reviewed the text and send you an invite to a Google doc. I didn't send
an invite to everyone because I'm aware that many of you can't open a
Google doc. <br><br>
Kind regards, <br>
Erika<br><br>
On Wed, Aug 22, 2018 at 7:52 PM, Alan Greenberg
<<a href="mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca">alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca</a>
> wrote:<br>
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<dd>Please find attached some minor edits to the Executive Summary as
promised at Monday's meeting.<font color="#888888"><br><br>
</font></dd><dd><font color="#888888">Alan</font><br>
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