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<p>Hi Alan,</p>
<p>this seems to be a leftover from the initial report. <br>
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<p>How about rewording it to:</p>
<pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">The review team considers WHOIS1 Recommendation 10 as fully implemented from a policy perspective, however as the PPSAI IRT has not yet concluded its work, we are making a recommendation to ensure the intent of the original recommendation of RT1 is implemented should the PPSAI IRT fail to come to a timely conclusion.</pre>
<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Am 31.01.2019 um 00:01 schrieb Alan
Greenberg:<br>
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<pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">Volker,
On page 5 of the P/P section
(<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RJZqEwjdiwxA_7tyYo87pjRlCCG7Emb-ByaRnjyEFAA/">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RJZqEwjdiwxA_7tyYo87pjRlCCG7Emb-ByaRnjyEFAA/</a>),
The following is problematic:
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<pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">Default:
The review team declines to make any recommendations regarding
privacy services as it considers WHOIS1 Recommendation 10 as fully
implemented.
Optional, triggered by failure or PPSAI IRT to conclude its work.
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"Default" and Optional are confusing, and the sentence is incorrect
in that we ARE making 2 recommendations (even though one of them may
evaporate if the IRT completes its work).
I suggest we delete all of that and just start with the "While the ..."
OK?
Alan
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