[registration-issues-wg] [CPWG] EPDP Submission

Alan Greenberg alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca
Fri Jan 4 02:49:59 UTC 2019


On behalf of Hadia and myself thanks to all for the kind comments.

And particularly to Bastiaan not only for his 
positive thoughts but his keen proofreading. The 
first two "nits" completely reverse the meaning!  I will wet the EPDP know.

Alan


At 03/01/2019 05:49 AM, Bastiaan Goslings wrote:
>All,
>
>I am on the verge of voting for -and approving- 
>ALAC’s submission, and I want to express my 
>gratitude for those responsible for drafting it. Especially Hadia and Alan.
>
>Putting my personal preferences aside, and 
>ignoring the fact that some people consider me 
>to be part of a ’surveillance caucus’ ;-) , 
>I think this contribution nicely covers ALAC’s 
>consensus with regard to the initial report. Well done!
>
>cheers,
>Bastiaan
>
>
>----------------
>
>
>A few nits/typo’s I noticed, just for the 
>record as I know I am too late and they will not be incorporated:
>
>Point 45: add ‘not’ —> ‘Without the Admin 
>ffields, there is the potential for a registration record not having’ (etc)
>
>Point 87: the GDPR only applies to _natural_ 
>persons, not legal persons - see recital 14
>
>Point 147: a bracket is missing after ‘disclosure’?
>
>And I do not know whether it was submitted as 
>such, but the version on the wiki page to be 
>voted upon by the ALAC does not include answers 
>for recommendations 13, 14 and 21.
>
>
>
>
>
> > On 20 Dec 2018, at 06:50, Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca> wrote:
> >
> > The draft submission has been updated at
> > https://community.icann.org/x/1wLuBQ, largely in response to the
> > comments submitted. A
> >
> > The most significant changes are for questions 29, 30, 44, 45, 145,
> > 147. I don't think that any of the changes will change the comfort
> > level of those who have been active in our discussions within At-Large.
> >
> > The document is largely frozen subject to final editing and will be
> > submitted on Friday.
> >
> > Alan
> >
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