[RSSAC Caucus] LAST CALL FOR REVIEWS: Review of RSSAC001v2

[Steve Sheng]

Dear RSSAC Caucus,

  The last call period for review has ended. We have received several editorial suggestions from Wes Hardaker. Duane and I have addressed Wes’ comments. Please see the redline of the changes attached.

  Barring significant changes to the document<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fTRTplssJUayL6XD-qAmkGltXOxmeuPe/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=100117360554257856034&rtpof=true&sd=true> by 3 July, the document will send to RSSAC for final review.

Best
Steve

From: rssac-caucus <rssac-caucus-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Steve Sheng <steve.sheng at icann.org>
Date: Monday, June 12, 2023 at 9:09 AM
To: RSSAC Caucus <rssac-caucus at icann.org>
Subject: [RSSAC Caucus] LAST CALL FOR REVIEWS: Review of RSSAC001v2

Dear RSSAC Caucus,

  Thank you for your feedback on the RSSAC001v2 document.

  The WP has taken the caucus feedback and produced the draft final document for your review.

  Please find the draft final and a PDF redline of changes since last RSSAC Caucus review. The google doc is available at: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fTRTplssJUayL6XD-qAmkGltXOxmeuPe/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=100117360554257856034&rtpof=true&sd=true [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1fTRTplssJUayL6XD-qAmkGltXOxmeuPe/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=100117360554257856034&rtpof=true&sd=true__;!!PtGJab4!8vxdtB7A_FZMEgxr30LChYCpT7Il7S6yL-L3eJt5jdBSHNuM_d-0tj9UCEJTMtbLbTxOfTQAdu471diD_IxRQZCsEMJi$>

  Please provide any last feedback you have on this document by 26 June 2023.

Best
Steve

From: Steve Sheng <steve.sheng at icann.org>
Date: Friday, March 10, 2023 at 2:36 PM
To: RSSAC Caucus <rssac-caucus at icann.org>
Subject: Caucus Review of RSSAC001v2

Dear RSSAC Caucus,

   The RSSAC001v2 work party has completed its update of RSSAC001. Please see attached a redline and clean version of RSSAC001v2 for your review.

   With this email, we begin the formal RSSAC Caucus review process. Please provide your comments by close of business Friday 7 April 2023 directly to the google doc below.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fTRTplssJUayL6XD-qAmkGltXOxmeuPe/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=100117360554257856034&rtpof=true&sd=true [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1fTRTplssJUayL6XD-qAmkGltXOxmeuPe/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=100117360554257856034&rtpof=true&sd=true__;!!PtGJab4!8vxdtB7A_FZMEgxr30LChYCpT7Il7S6yL-L3eJt5jdBSHNuM_d-0tj9UCEJTMtbLbTxOfTQAdu471diD_IxRQZCsEMJi$>

Best
Steve
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