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Dear RSSAC Caucus Members,
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<div class="">Thanks to everyone who helped review RSSAC023v2 and added comments and text into the Google doc.</div>
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<div class="">Based on all the comments and edits received I have prepared a a final draft ready for the one week final review. After this review RSSAC023v2 will be forwarded to the RSSAC for a vote. </div>
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<div class="">The Revision History(Section 6.2) contains the major changes between v1 and v2, and I’ve also reproduced it below.</div>
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<div class="">Section 1.1, Terminology was added<br class="">
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<div class="">Section 2.5, InterNIC was renamed to Internic and Continued Expansion to recognize that it covered more than just InterNIC<br class="">
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<div class="">Section 2.8, DNS Root Provision Modification (1998) was added <br class="">
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<div class="">Section 2.10, IANA Transition was added<br class="">
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<div class="">Section 2.11, Proposed Governance Model for the DNS Root Server System was added<br class="">
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<div class="">Many small edits were made to Section 2 for clarification and grammar<br class="">
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<div class="">Sub-Section titles in Section 3 were renamed in accordance with RSSAC050<br class="">
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<div class="">Sub-Sections of Section 3 were each updated by their respective root server operator<br class="">
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<div class="">The identifiers and operator names in Appendix A were updated<br class="">
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<div class="">An introduction was added to Appendix B<br class="">
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<div class="">Many references in Appendix B were changed to more enduring citations</div>
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<div class="">Please add any comments by <b class="">Friday May 29</b>. </div>
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<div class="">PDF is also attached, but please add any comments into the Google doc if you can.</div>
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<div class="">Thanks,</div>
<div class="">Andrew<br class="">
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<div class="">On Apr 8, 2020, at 15:29, Andrew McConachie <<a href="mailto:andrew.mcconachie@icann.org" class="">andrew.mcconachie@icann.org</a>> wrote:</div>
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Dear RSSAC Caucus Members,
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<div class="">Thanks everyone who joined the call on Monday April 6th to discuss RSSAC023v2: History of the Root Server System version 2.</div>
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<div class="">As discussed on the call I accepted many suggestions in the Google doc and cleaned it up a bit.</div>
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<div class="">The major new edits we discussed on the call were to the following sections.</div>
<div class="">1.1 Terminology</div>
<div class="">2.11 Proposed Governance Model for the DNS Root Server System</div>
<div class="">7.2 Historical Copies of Root Name Server Information</div>
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<div class="">Please review those sections specifically and if you have any suggestions please add them to the document.</div>
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<div class="">There are still some formatting and whitespace issues that I need to fix in the document. I will be working on that this week and will produce a new version next week for the full 2 week RSSAC Caucus review cycle.</div>
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<div class="">Thanks,</div>
<div class="">Andrew</div>
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