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<div class="">Thanks to the members who provided edits during the final week review of this document. There were no substantive comments made in this final review. Only nits, grammar edits and formatting changes. RSSAC023v2 will now be forwarded to the RSSAC
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<div class="">Thanks,</div>
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<div class="">On May 22, 2020, at 17:09, Andrew McConachie <<a href="mailto:andrew.mcconachie@icann.org" class="">andrew.mcconachie@icann.org</a>> wrote:</div>
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Dear RSSAC Caucus Members,
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<div class="">Thanks to everyone who helped review RSSAC023v2 and added comments and text into the Google doc.</div>
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<div class="">Based on all the comments and edits received I have prepared a a final draft ready for the one week final review. After this review RSSAC023v2 will be forwarded to the RSSAC for a vote. </div>
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<div class="">The Revision History(Section 6.2) contains the major changes between v1 and v2, and I’ve also reproduced it below.</div>
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<div class="">Section 1.1, Terminology was added<br class="">
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<div class="">Section 2.5, InterNIC was renamed to Internic and Continued Expansion to recognize that it covered more than just InterNIC<br class="">
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<div class="">Section 2.8, DNS Root Provision Modification (1998) was added <br class="">
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<div class="">Section 2.10, IANA Transition was added<br class="">
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<div class="">Section 2.11, Proposed Governance Model for the DNS Root Server System was added<br class="">
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<div class="">Many small edits were made to Section 2 for clarification and grammar<br class="">
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<div class="">Sub-Section titles in Section 3 were renamed in accordance with RSSAC050<br class="">
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<div class="">Sub-Sections of Section 3 were each updated by their respective root server operator<br class="">
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<div class="">The identifiers and operator names in Appendix A were updated<br class="">
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<div class="">An introduction was added to Appendix B<br class="">
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<div class="">Many references in Appendix B were changed to more enduring citations</div>
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<div class="">Please add any comments by <b class="">Friday May 29</b>. </div>
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<div class="">PDF is also attached, but please add any comments into the Google doc if you can.</div>
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<div class="">On Apr 8, 2020, at 15:29, Andrew McConachie <<a href="mailto:andrew.mcconachie@icann.org" class="">andrew.mcconachie@icann.org</a>> wrote:</div>
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<div class="">Thanks everyone who joined the call on Monday April 6th to discuss RSSAC023v2: History of the Root Server System version 2.</div>
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<div class="">As discussed on the call I accepted many suggestions in the Google doc and cleaned it up a bit.</div>
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<div class="">The major new edits we discussed on the call were to the following sections.</div>
<div class="">1.1 Terminology</div>
<div class="">2.11 Proposed Governance Model for the DNS Root Server System</div>
<div class="">7.2 Historical Copies of Root Name Server Information</div>
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<div class="">Please review those sections specifically and if you have any suggestions please add them to the document.</div>
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<div class="">There are still some formatting and whitespace issues that I need to fix in the document. I will be working on that this week and will produce a new version next week for the full 2 week RSSAC Caucus review cycle.</div>
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<div class="">Thanks,</div>
<div class="">Andrew</div>
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