Hi Peter<br><br>Thanks for sending this new draft out to the list with plenty of time for review before our next call. <br><br>All - I hope that, as before, you will contribute your thoughts and comments on the draft.<br>
<br>One format issue - I think it's better to have the text reflect the comment and then footnote the contributor's details. That way, people focus on what is said rather than focusing on the identity of the contributor. Let me know what you think of this.<br>
<br>Kind regards<br><br>Emily<br><br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On 8 September 2011 01:00, Nettlefold, Peter <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:Peter.Nettlefold@dbcde.gov.au">Peter.Nettlefold@dbcde.gov.au</a>></span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex;"><div link="blue" vlink="purple" lang="EN-AU"><div><p class="MsoNormal">Hello all,<u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">
<u></u> <u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">Attached is a draft gap analysis relating to WHOIS data accuracy.<u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">As with the accessibility/privacy section, I have not had time to cover all the issues, complete all the analyses, balance all the arguments, and so on in this first draft. However, I hope that it has enough structure and shape to encourage comment, debate, and input as we prepare for Marina del Rey.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">One issue I’ve struggled with is the structure. As you’ve seen, I’ve basically broken the gap analysis in two (privacy/access and accuracy) because:<u></u><u></u></p>
<p><u></u><span style="font-family:Symbol"><span>·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman""> </span></span></span><u></u>these two areas seemed to attract the most comment from our stakeholders; <u></u><u></u></p>
<p><u></u><span style="font-family:Symbol"><span>·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman""> </span></span></span><u></u>they are clearly drawn out as issues in the AoC provisions on WHOIS; and<u></u><u></u></p>
<p><u></u><span style="font-family:Symbol"><span>·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman""> </span></span></span><u></u>many of the other ‘gaps’ we initially identified seem to be sub-components of these two broader issues or to be closely linked to them.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">Now that there is a draft in this form, I’m hoping that others will comment on whether this structure will allow us to sensibly cover all the gaps or if there is a better way to pull the pieces together.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">Cheers,<u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">Peter<u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p></div>
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