<html><head></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><div><div><div>Dear Review Team Members,</div><div><br></div><div>This is now available on the wiki at: <a href="https://community.icann.org/display/whoisreviewprivate/Draft+report">https://community.icann.org/display/whoisreviewprivate/Draft+report</a></div><div>Note that I will be circulating a version later today that includes diagrams, Susan's comments on the report and comments submitted by Lutz on the brief guide to WHOIS.</div><div>Please stay tuned!</div><div><br></div><div>Thanks,</div><div><br></div><div>Kind regards</div><div><br></div><div>Alice</div><div><div><div>-- </div><div><div><div><div><b>Alice Jansen</b></div></div><div>Assistant, Organizational Reviews</div><div><i>6 Rond Point Schuman, Bt.5</i></div><div><i>B-1040 Brussels</i></div><div><i>Belgium</i></div><div>Direct dial: +32 2 234 78 64</div><div>Mobile: +32 4 73 31 76 56</div><div>Skype: alice_jansen<span style="font-style: italic; ">_</span>icann</div></div></div></div><div><br></div><div><br></div></div></div></div><div><br></div><span id="OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION"><div style="font-family:Calibri; font-size:11pt; text-align:left; color:black; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0in; PADDING-LEFT: 0in; PADDING-RIGHT: 0in; BORDER-TOP: #b5c4df 1pt solid; BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-TOP: 3pt"><span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span> Kathy Kleiman <<a href="mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com">kathy@kathykleiman.com</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span> Mon, 28 Nov 2011 07:31:43 -0800<br><span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span> "<a href="mailto:rt4-whois@icann.org">rt4-whois@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:rt4-whois@icann.org">rt4-whois@icann.org</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span> [Rt4-whois] Newest version of our Reprt<br></div><div><br></div><div>
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Dear All,<br>
I hope you had a great weekend, and a good holiday. In the
background, I see many groups working, exchanging email, and
talking. Tx you!<br>
<br>
Emily and I have been talking on a daily basis to massage the report
into shape, and she, I would like to share and wanted to share the
most up-to-date version of our edited report.<i><b> Alice, could you
kindly post this to our Wiki?</b></i><br>
<br>
Quick notes;<br>
- report follows editing format we we agreed on Wednesday -- not
using track changes, but instead a format that keeps all the text
within the report to show the proposed changes: e.g., [KK Add: ] [KK
Delete: ].<br>
- chapter breaks, titles, and material rearranged a bit into a
different order. It's all still there! Lynn's chapter, Sarmad's
chapter, all given prominence in new chapters<br>
- More and bolded subtitles, etc., to make the document easier
to scan <br>
<br>
Longer note: Emily, Peter and I have worked this weekend on the Gap
Analysis, and breaking it into two chapters. Please note that
Chapters 7/8 are not updated in the current draft -- and we'll be
circulating a proposed draft within the day. <br>
<br>
All the best and enjoy,<br>
Kathy<br>
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