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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I always stand for shorter ‘main body’ and informative appendices. Support Lynn: however, at least some words on WHOIS system should be in the
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org [mailto:rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Emily Taylor<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, November 29, 2011 11:15 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> lynn@goodsecurityconsulting.com<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Kathy Kleiman; rt4-whois@icann.org; Emily Taylor<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Rt4-whois] DNS and WHOIS - How it Works<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Hi Lynn<br>
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Interesting suggestion. Any others share this view?<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On 29 November 2011 20:05, <<a href="mailto:lynn@goodsecurityconsulting.com">lynn@goodsecurityconsulting.com</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black">After reading through the Draft Report, it seems to me that the section<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black">on "DNS and WHOIS- How it Works" should be an Appendix rather than in the main body of the report.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black">While it is useful to have as reference for the reader, it somewhat disrupts the thought flow of the<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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