<html><body><span style="font-family:Verdana; color:#000000; font-size:10pt;"><div>Here is another quick way to improve this section of the Draft Report.</div>
<div>Wikipedia has beautifully written material on both WHOIS and the DNS- Domain Name System.</div>
<div>Here is the link to its WHOIS info:</div>
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<div> <A href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/WHOIS">http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/WHOIS</A></div>
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<div>and the link to DNS info:</div>
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<div><A href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Domain_name_system">http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Domain_name_system</A></div>
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<div>These links could be footnotes in the main report or be used in an Appendix with appropriate acknowledgments to Wikipedia.</div>
<div>Bonus is that Wikipedia is available in multiple languages.</div>
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<div>Lynn</div>
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<div>-------- Original Message --------<BR>Subject: [Rt4-whois] DNS and WHOIS - How it Works<BR>From: <<a href="mailto:lynn@goodsecurityconsulting.com">lynn@goodsecurityconsulting.com</a>><BR>Date: Tue, November 29, 2011 3:05 pm<BR>To: "Emily Taylor" <<a href="mailto:emily.taylor@etlaw.co.uk">emily.taylor@etlaw.co.uk</a>>, "Kathy Kleiman"<BR><<a href="mailto:Kathy@kathykleiman.com">Kathy@kathykleiman.com</a>><BR>Cc: <a href="mailto:rt4-whois@icann.org">rt4-whois@icann.org</a><BR><BR></div>
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<DIV>Suggestion: Change from Chapter to Appendix</DIV>
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<DIV>After reading through the Draft Report, it seems to me that the section</DIV>
<DIV>on "DNS and WHOIS- How it Works" should be an Appendix rather than in the main body of the report.</DIV>
<DIV>While it is useful to have as reference for the reader, it somewhat disrupts the thought flow of the</DIV>
<DIV>assessment and paper.</DIV>
<DIV>-Lynn</DIV>
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