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<DIV><SPAN class=644254414-30112011><FONT face=Calibri
color=#0000ff>Emily,</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV><SPAN class=644254414-30112011><FONT face=Calibri
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<DIV><SPAN class=644254414-30112011><FONT face=Calibri color=#0000ff>Happy with
this definition:</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV><SPAN class=644254414-30112011><FONT face=Calibri><SPAN lang=EN-US
style="FONT-FAMILY: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri">Any entity charged
or otherwise mandated by governments with enforcing or ensuring observance of or
obedience to the law; an organised body of people officially maintained or
employed to keep order, prevent or detect crime and enforce the
law</SPAN></FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV><SPAN class=644254414-30112011><FONT face=Calibri color=#0000ff>Moving
intro to DNS to Appendices good ideas. </FONT></SPAN><SPAN
class=644254414-30112011><FONT face=Calibri color=#0000ff>Alice had the latest
version, with Lutz's included.</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV><SPAN class=644254414-30112011><FONT face=Calibri
color=#0000ff>Sharon</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<P><SPAN lang=en-gb><FONT face=Calibri color=#808080>Sharon LEMON
OBE</FONT></SPAN> <BR><SPAN lang=en-gb><FONT face=Calibri color=#808080>Deputy
Director</FONT></SPAN> <BR><SPAN lang=en-gb><FONT face=Calibri
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face=Calibri color=#808080>Serious and Organised Crime Agency
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855 2800</FONT></SPAN> </P>
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<DIV class=OutlookMessageHeader lang=en-us dir=ltr align=left><FONT
face=Tahoma size=2>-----Original Message-----<BR><B>From:</B> Emily Taylor
[mailto:emily@emilytaylor.eu] <BR><B>Sent:</B> 30 November 2011
14:30<BR><B>To:</B> LEMON, Sharon<BR><B>Cc:</B>
rt4-whois@icann.org<BR><B>Subject:</B> Re: [Rt4-whois] WHOIS Policy RT - Law
Enforcement comments.<BR><BR></FONT></DIV>Hi Sharon<BR><BR>Thanks for working
through this.<BR><BR>Sorry to say it, but I will - I don't think your new
version of the law enf. definition will work. It includes the world and
his wife. Can I have your snap response to the following
proposal:<BR><BR>
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lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri">Any
entity charged or otherwise mandated by governments with enforcing or ensuring
observance of or obedience to the law; an organised body of people officially
maintained or employed to keep order, prevent or detect crime and enforce the
law.<BR></SPAN></P><BR>Unfortunately, your colleague from Canada was working
to quite an old draft, which has been superseded several times over. I
can see the comments, and note what is said about impact. We have been
discussing moving chunks into appendices. Would the intro to the domain
name system be a good candidate?<BR><BR>Can you give me finalised text for
that section, please, which incorporates the latest comments made by Lutz and
others - this version seems to be based on an older draft.<BR><BR>The comments
from Gary and others later in the text, and gap analysis are good. I'd
like to see how we can incorporate some of them. At the moment my priorities
are to get the bits lining up in the right places, and have the executive
summary, findings and recommendations agreed.<BR><BR>Kind
regards<BR><BR>Emily<BR><BR>
<DIV class=gmail_quote>On 30 November 2011 13:48, LEMON, Sharon <SPAN
dir=ltr><<A
href="mailto:sharon.lemon@soca.x.gsi.gov.uk">sharon.lemon@soca.x.gsi.gov.uk</A>></SPAN>
wrote:<BR>
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<DIV><SPAN><FONT face=Calibri color=#0000ff>Dear Emily, Alice and
All,</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV><SPAN><FONT face=Calibri color=#0000ff></FONT></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV><SPAN><FONT face=Calibri color=#0000ff>Sorry for arriving at the party
late, I have been watching in awe the hundreds of emails flying about.
We gave until today for our international colleagues to comment and we have
just had our own internal meeting to finalise the comments on the
paper.</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV><SPAN><FONT face=Calibri color=#0000ff></FONT></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV><SPAN><FONT face=Calibri color=#0000ff>The paper complemented our
ongoing law enforcement work within the ICANN community and there are not
comments of major significance -ours are in green. I know that Alice
is currently going through the nightmare of trying to organise the version
control. (Good Luck and thanks Alice). </FONT></SPAN><SPAN><FONT
face=Calibri color=#0000ff></FONT></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV><SPAN><FONT face=Calibri color=#0000ff>I have replaced the definition
of law enforcement with:</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV><SPAN></SPAN><SPAN></SPAN><SPAN><FONT face=Calibri
color=#0000ff></FONT></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Calibri">Any entity with a
responsibility to enforce or ensure observance to or obedience of the law,
whether mandated by government or otherwise<SPAN>.</SPAN></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV><SPAN lang=EN-US
style="FONT-FAMILY: Calibri"><SPAN></SPAN></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Calibri"><SPAN><FONT
color=#0000ff>We could go on forever with this - but let me know if there
are any show stopping objections.</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Calibri"><SPAN><FONT
color=#0000ff></FONT></SPAN></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Calibri"><SPAN><FONT
color=#0000ff>I hope we make the deadline of 5pm
;-)</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Calibri"><SPAN><FONT
color=#0000ff></FONT></SPAN></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Calibri"><SPAN><FONT
color=#0000ff>Sharon</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=Calibri color=#0000ff></FONT> </DIV>
<P><SPAN lang=en-gb><FONT face=Calibri color=#808080>Sharon LEMON
OBE</FONT></SPAN> <BR><SPAN lang=en-gb><FONT face=Calibri
color=#808080>Deputy Director</FONT></SPAN> <BR><SPAN lang=en-gb><FONT
face=Calibri color=#808080>Cyber and Forensics</FONT></SPAN> <BR><SPAN
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<DIV lang=en-us dir=ltr align=left><FONT face=Tahoma size=2>-----Original
Message-----<BR><B>From:</B> KIBBEY, Gary <BR><B>Sent:</B> 30 November 2011
13:16<BR><B>To:</B> LEMON, Sharon<BR><B>Subject:</B> FW: Emailing: WHOIS
Policy RT - Draft report - 24 Nov - Clean CC GK
Comments<BR><BR></FONT></DIV>
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<P><SPAN lang=en-gb><FONT face=Arial size=2>Gary Kibbey</FONT><FONT
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<DIV lang=en-us dir=ltr align=left><FONT face=Tahoma size=2>-----Original
Message-----<BR><B>From:</B> FLAHERTY, Jonathan <BR><B>Sent:</B> 29 November
2011 17:54<BR><B>To:</B> KIBBEY, Gary; ADDIS, Benedict<BR><B>Cc:</B> CURLEY,
Cliona<BR><B>Subject:</B> RE: Emailing: WHOIS Policy RT - Draft report - 24
Nov - Clean CC GK Comments<BR><BR></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><SPAN><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff size=2>My comments
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<P><SPAN lang=en-gb><B><FONT face=Arial color=#808080 size=2>Jon Flaherty |
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<DIV lang=en-us dir=ltr align=left><FONT face=Tahoma size=2>-----Original
Message-----<BR><B>From:</B> KIBBEY, Gary <BR><B>Sent:</B> 29 November
2011 14:34<BR><B>To:</B> FLAHERTY, Jonathan; ADDIS, Benedict<BR><B>Cc:</B>
CURLEY, Cliona<BR><B>Subject:</B> FW: Emailing: WHOIS Policy RT - Draft
report - 24 Nov - Clean CC GK Comments<BR><BR></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff size=2><SPAN>Gents
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<DIV><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff size=2><SPAN>If you have any comments
-can you drop onto this working copy. Don't track changes - just
comments.</SPAN></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff size=2><SPAN>Ta </SPAN></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff size=2><SPAN>Gary </SPAN></FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff size=2></FONT> </DIV>
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<DIV lang=en-us dir=ltr align=left><FONT face=Tahoma size=2>-----Original
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