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<P><FONT face="microsoft sans serif" color=red size=2><B>NOT PROTECTIVELY MARKED
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<DIV><SPAN class=815154813-30112011>All,</SPAN></DIV>
<DIV><SPAN class=815154813-30112011></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV><SPAN class=815154813-30112011>A late arrival from Canada - I can't find
the tracked changes - does anyone know what this means? </SPAN></DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=#0000ff>These suggested corrections are reflected in the Word
Tracking feature under the #000035590 code. The Comments are identified more
clearly (under Fred and my name).</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=#0000ff></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><SPAN class=815154813-30112011>In fact, I can't even open the document,
computer says 'No'. The only other point they make is that the document is too
long.</SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV><SPAN class=815154813-30112011>Sharon</SPAN></DIV><!-- Converted from text/rtf format -->
<P><SPAN lang=en-gb><FONT face=Calibri color=#808080>Sharon LEMON
OBE</FONT></SPAN> <BR><SPAN lang=en-gb><FONT face=Calibri color=#808080>Deputy
Director</FONT></SPAN> <BR><SPAN lang=en-gb><FONT face=Calibri
color=#808080>Cyber and Forensics</FONT></SPAN> <BR><SPAN lang=en-gb><FONT
face=Calibri color=#808080>Serious and Organised Crime Agency
(SOCA)</FONT></SPAN> <BR><SPAN lang=en-gb><FONT face=Calibri color=#808080>07768
290902</FONT></SPAN> <BR><SPAN lang=en-gb><FONT face=Calibri color=#808080>0207
855 2800</FONT></SPAN> </P>
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<DIV class=OutlookMessageHeader lang=en-us dir=ltr align=left><SPAN
class=815154813-30112011> </SPAN>Hello Shona/Gary,</DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV>Further to your earlier message please be advised that Lieutenant Frédérick
(Fred) Gaudreau, Sûreté du Québec, and I have reviewed the WHOIS Policy RT
- Draft document and have identified suggested corrections/comments that we
would respectfully submit for your consideration. These suggested corrections
are reflected in the Word Tracking feature under the #000035590 code. The
Comments are identified more clearly (under Fred and my name).</DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV>Please note that we did not have sufficient time to review the Appendices
document.</DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV>We recognize the importance of this document and fully appreciate
everyone's efforts in putting this together. However we would humbly submit
that perhaps the document would have more impact if it were strategically
focused to within a 15-20 page document. The Appendices document would
also need to be downsized but it could include additional information currently
in the main draft Policy document. We feel this would ensure to highlight
the main issues and this would in turn ensure to provide the reader
with all the relevant information surrounding the WHOIS issue. </DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV>Please feel free to contact us if you have any questions.</DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV>Marc<BR><BR></DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV>S/Sgt Marc Moreau, s-é-m<BR>Royal Canadian Mounted Police/Gendarmerie
royale du Canada<BR>Strategic Communications and Liaison Officer,
Technological Crime Branch, <BR>Spécialiste en Communication et Agent de
liaison, Sous-direction de la criminalité technologique,<BR>1426 St. Joseph
Blvd., Rm 2200<BR>Ottawa, Ontario K1A 0R2<BR>Ph. (613)
993-6011<BR>Fax (613) 993-2963>>> "McINTOSH, Shona"
<shona.mcintosh@soca.x.gsi.gov.uk> 11/25/2011 8:59 AM
>>><BR></DIV>
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<DIV><SPAN class=578185413-25112011><FONT face=Arial>Dear
All</FONT> </SPAN></DIV>
<P><FONT face=Arial><SPAN class=578185413-25112011> Please see
a</SPAN>ttached<SPAN class=578185413-25112011>; </SPAN> the latest version
of the Whois Review Team Report. <SPAN
class=578185413-25112011> Please can you have a read, and make any comments
you feel necessary.</SPAN></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=Arial>Instructions for comm<SPAN
class=578185413-25112011>e</SPAN>nt: Rather than track changes, can any changes
please be inserted directly into the text, highlighted in yellow and your
initials added at the end?</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=Arial>The deadline for this back to me / Gary is<STRONG> GMT 1200
on 29th November. </STRONG><SPAN class=578185413-25112011><FONT
color=#0000ff> <FONT color=#000000>Apologies for the tight
timescale.</FONT> </FONT></SPAN></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=Arial></FONT></P>
<P><B><FONT face=Arial color=#808080>Shona McIntosh</FONT></B><FONT face=Arial
color=#808080> l</FONT><BR><FONT face=Arial color=#808080>Staff Officer to
Sharon Lemon | </FONT><BR><B></B><B></B><B><FONT face=Arial
color=#808080>Serious Organised Crime Agency</FONT></B><FONT face=Arial
color=#808080> l +44(0)20 78552941</FONT><BR><FONT face=Arial
color=#808080>07717347907 | shona.mcintosh@soca.x.gsi.gov.uk</FONT><FONT
face="Times New Roman"> </FONT></P><BR>
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