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<meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=Windows-1252"></head><body style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><div><div><div style="font-size: 14px; ">Dear Review Team members,</div><div style="font-size: 14px; "><br></div><div style="font-size: 14px; ">Please find attached the most recent version of the master document.</div><div style="font-size: 14px; "><br></div><div style="font-size: 14px; ">This version contains the following:</div><ul><li style="font-size: 14px; ">Lynn's edits including review of Sharon and Law Enforcement's comments</li><li style="font-size: 14px; ">Susan's additional quotes from comments (NCUC, ALAC)</li><li style="font-size: 14px; ">The Dakar definitions</li><li style="font-size: 14px; ">Emily's language – findings section</li><li style="font-size: 14px; ">The best practices text (Susan, Kathy and James)</li><li>Lutz' recommendations <span class="Apple-style-span" style="color: rgb(20, 20, 20); line-height: 14px; font-family: Calibri; ">(along with alternatives - please refer to Kathy's email - No agreement on Lutz's recommendations - 1 Dec 22:51 UTC). </span></li></ul><div style="font-size: 14px; "><div>Please proofread all and closely examine text, in particular 7,8,9.</div></div><div style="font-size: 14px; "><br></div><div style="font-size: 14px; ">Note that footnotes have been added and that typos have been found.</div><div style="font-size: 14px; "><br></div><div style="font-size: 14px; "><div>I *believe* this document is up-to-date. Should you notice a missing piece of information or inconsistencies, please email me asap so that I can rectify for subsequent versions.</div><div><br></div><div>The document is also available on the wiki at: <a href="https://community.icann.org/display/whoisreviewprivate/Draft+report">https://community.icann.org/display/whoisreviewprivate/Draft+report</a></div></div><div style="font-size: 14px; "><br></div><div style="font-size: 14px; ">Thanks,</div><div style="font-size: 14px; "><br></div><div style="font-size: 14px; ">Kind regards</div><div style="font-size: 14px; "><br></div><div style="font-size: 14px; ">Alice</div><div style="font-size: 14px; "><div><div>-- </div><div><div><div><div><b>Alice Jansen</b></div></div><div>Assistant, Organizational Reviews</div><div><i>6 Rond Point Schuman, Bt.5</i></div><div><i>B-1040 Brussels</i></div><div><i>Belgium</i></div><div>Direct dial: +32 2 234 78 64</div><div>Mobile: +32 4 73 31 76 56</div><div>Skype: alice_jansen<span style="font-style: italic; ">_</span>icann</div></div></div></div><div><br></div><div><br></div></div></div></div></body></html>