<div class="gmail_extra">Hi Kathy</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">Thank you for bringing this work forward.</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">Good, minimalist work on the Exec summary, and I like what you've done on the studies, although personally I liked the previous language.</div>
<div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">I would be in favour of reverting to the bold statement about the system being broken and needing fixing. It was picked up in many of the articles about the draft report, and it now reads as if we've changed our mind about this, and it's a bit too watered down. Re-reading the situation on IDNs makes me believe strongly that we need to convey in simple terms a sense of <b>urgency.</b></div>
<div class="gmail_extra"><b><br></b></div><div class="gmail_extra">It would be great- and easier to see what's happening, if the agreed findings and recommendations could be accepted (ie no longer in tracked changes) so that we can see clearly what is new.</div>
<div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">Alice - could you do that please?</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">Also, Alice, for completeness we need to include the findings and recommendations from the new Compliance Chapter that I sent around yesterday - please have that marked up as people have not yet considered it.</div>
<div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">Finally, Kathy you mentioned that the WDRP recommendation has now been replaced by the new compliance recommendations. Actually, we decided in Costa Rica to keep the WDRP recommendation but to move it into data accuracy, where it fits more logically. Alice - could you do that please. Keep the text as it is, not marked up, but just put a comment in to highlight that it's been moved.</div>
<div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">Thanks again, Kathy, good work.</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">Emily</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">
On 27 April 2012 22:53, Kathy Kleiman <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com" target="_blank">kathy@kathykleiman.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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Hi All, <br>
I sat down with three screens open and tried to work my way through
the Executive Summary (as promised in our meeting Wed). I referenced
our original report, slides from the Public Forum, texts that Alice
has finalized, and Comment Summary that Alice prepared. In addition
to a few edits to the text to remove a few "rough edges," I tried to
cut and paste all the new texts for Findings and Recommendations. No
promises, but I did the best I could :-)!<br>
<br>
Overall, I think this reads very well. I like how the findings and
recommendations flow... and I think our work shows!<br>
<i><b>If there are some quick edits over the weekend, I may put them
in, but otherwise, I pass the pen to Alice, and ask her to post
this with our other new sections for review and comment. </b></i><br>
<br>
Have a good weekend, <br>
Kathy <br>
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