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Hi Peter, Emily and All,<br>
I think things are looking good! <br>
Best,<br>
Kathy<br>
p.s. quick note to Alice that I would be happy to work with her to
ensure that all the embedded comments I put into the Executive
Summary (for us) are removed in the final version.<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Hello
all,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Thanks
to Emily, Kathy and all the others who have contributed to
this revised draft.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I
have made several comments and edits in revision mode. These
are primarily to:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph"
style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol;color:#1F497D"><span
style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt
"Times New Roman""> </span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Comment
on Emily’s and Kathy’s discussion about whether to reinstate
text from the first draft – in general, I agree to
reinstating the relevant text, but can also live with some
minor softening in places<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph"
style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol;color:#1F497D"><span
style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt
"Times New Roman""> </span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Seek
some clarification on the outreach recommendation (#3). In
short, I strongly support the sentiment, and make some
comments about clarifying/sharpening the recommendation. I
have not offered alternate text for this one, as I’m not
sure I fully understand the nuances, so I’ll look for others
to comment.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph"
style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol;color:#1F497D"><span
style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt
"Times New Roman""> </span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Add
the additional sub-part to the compliance recommendation(#4)
that I circulated earlier, and which to date only Emily has
commented on and supported<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph"
style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol;color:#1F497D"><span
style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt
"Times New Roman""> </span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Edit
the privacy/proxy text, to remove the reference to
‘legitimate’ in the findings, and more substantively to
offer a draft alternative to the contentious last paragraph
in the recommendation (#10)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph"
style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol;color:#1F497D"><span
style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt
"Times New Roman""> </span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Add
an ‘awareness raising’ component to the data access
recommendation (#11)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph"
style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol;color:#1F497D"><span
style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt
"Times New Roman""> </span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">(Re)offer
alternative wording for the status reports recommendation
(#15) to clarify the timing and expectations<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I
hope this helps.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Cheers,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Peter<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">PS.
I have just seen Alice’s email with a newer version of the
Executive Summary, which includes the data validation text,
so I apologise for making extra work by having made all my
comments in the earlier version!<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""
lang="EN-US">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""
lang="EN-US"> <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org">rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org</a>
[<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="mailto:rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org">mailto:rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org</a>] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Emily
Taylor<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Saturday, 28 April 2012 9:59 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:rt4-whois@icann.org">rt4-whois@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Rt4-whois] Executive summary, findings
and recommendations - revised<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Dear all<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><br>
Thank you Kathy for your work on combining our discussions,
findings and recommendations into a single document along
with the Executive Summary.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I have gone through it all now, and
attach a marked up draft, which I hope does the following:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal">1. I have marked as accepted all the
text which I believe has been agreed by the team on our
previous calls - that is the wording of findings and
recommendations on strategic priority, data accuracy, most
of the wording on privacy proxy (apart from last para), the
common interface, and the new ones at the end on progress
reporting. <span style="background:#FFFF33"> I may have got
this wrong, and hope that others will review carefully.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">2. I have marked up new text:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">- there were some sections of the old
exec summary which I thought we could reintroduce since they
make important points on (1) consensus building and (2)
consumer trust.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">- The text on strategic priority which is
new, recalls our agreement on the last call. This is
basically Susan's text. Having reviewed the whole
recommendation, it makes sense (I think) to pull out some
duplicate ideas (on incentives), and also to put the
reporting bit at the end.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal">- I added a few words into Kathy's new
text introducing Outreach (rec 3). I like Kathy's text and
recommend that it is accepted.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal">- Whole new section on Compliance. As
reported on our last call, we've had an outline in
circulation for some time, but only had the opportunity to
discuss in our small team yesterday. This is our proposal,
which is lifted from the larger chapter that was circulated
yesterday.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal">- I added the WDRP text (which was quite
a popular draft recommendation!) into data accuracy
recommendations. I recall from our discussions in Costa
Rica that we agreed it was a bit out of place as the second
recommendation, and that it fitted better as a sub-section
on accuracy. Having put in that recommendation, I saw that
we had no text in the findings to anchor it. Taking Kathy's
approach, I found the paragraph in our original draft report
(Compliance chapter - findings), which described the problem
we perceive.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal">- The paragraph on data validation
(drafted by James, Lynn and me) is now at the end of the
findings on data accuracy, as agreed on our last call.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Otherwise, I recommend Kathy's changes
are accepted (I've left them marked up so all can see and
comment).<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal">Lastly, Kathy - you asked about
"de-accreditation", and my recollection is that we noted
James' draft and helpful explanations on this, and agreed
that we didn't need to go further or add new text into the
recommendations. Again, if I've misunderstood, please shout.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="background:#FFFF33">All:
Would be grateful for your input on this as soon as
possible. Even if it's a short e-mail saying "I read it;
I agree" ;-)</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Kind regards<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><br>
Emily<o:p></o:p></p>
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