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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body bgcolor=white lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>My comments on the current draft of Recommendation 10: Data Access- Privacy and Proxy Services<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Findings: Para 2: I agree with Peter to delete the word “legitimate”.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Recommendations: top of next page beginning with “ICANN could, for example, use a mix of”: I would delete the phrase “to encourage proxy/privacy service providers to become accredited”. Leaving the phrase in suggests that ICANN could tolerate a community of non-accredited proxy/privacy providers and I feel this is the wrong message to send.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Same page bullet two: I am still confused who is provide the full details and if the details are of the service provider or the beneficiary user.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Last paragraph last bullet. I like Peter’s comment “Clarifying the issue of rights/responsibilities/liabilities should be an essential part of the proxy/privacy discussion, with the goal being clear and comprehensive guidance for the community.” (I’ve tried to improve it a little). Can we place this statement above as a recommendation separate from the bullet points, perhaps as the second, third or fourth paragraph under Recommendations. I sense that strengthening this statement could address Susan’s concerns as well.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Seth<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:windowtext'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:windowtext'> rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org [mailto:rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Nettlefold, Peter<br><b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, May 01, 2012 2:51 PM<br><b>To:</b> rt4-whois@icann.org<br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [Rt4-whois] Executive Summary [SEC=UNCLASSIFIED]<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Hi all,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>In advance of tonight’s call, I just wanted to note that there seem to be two versions on v6 out there – one I sent yesterday with ‘v6 pn’ in the title, and more recent version sent by Susan with ‘v6 Susan’s comments’.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>I’m not commenting on the content as such, but just noting the version issue.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Cheers,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Peter<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:windowtext'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:windowtext'> <a href="mailto:rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org">rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org">mailto:rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org</a>] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Kathy Kleiman<br><b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, 2 May 2012 9:53 AM<br><b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:rt4-whois@icann.org">rt4-whois@icann.org</a><br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [Rt4-whois] Executive Summary<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><span lang=EN-AU>Hi All,<br>I am sorry that I will not be able to attend the meeting in a few hours (it's at 2am my time). Thanks to everyone for all the discussion and editing! I support the Executive Summary and IDN Comments. <br><br>I wanted to share a particular support for the new proxy/privacy point that Peter added. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p style='mso-margin-top-alt:5.0pt;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:12.0pt;margin-left:.75in;line-height:12.25pt'><span lang=EN-AU style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";background:yellow'>providing clear and unambiguous guidance on the rights and responsibilities of registered name holders, and how those should be managed in the privacy/proxy environment</span><span lang=EN-AU><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU>I'm happy to work with Alice on removing all the comments I inserted... and regards to all!<br>Kathy<br><br>: <o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal><span class=apple-style-span><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:7.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Thank you all for your hard work on the executive summary. I have made a few comments but for the most part I am in agreement with the current draft. </span></span><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:7.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:7.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span class=apple-style-span><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:7.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Talk to you tonight. </span></span><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:7.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:7.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span class=apple-style-span><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:7.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Susan Kawaguchi</span></span><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:7.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span class=apple-style-span><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:7.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Domain Name Manager</span></span><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:7.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span class=apple-style-span><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:7.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Facebook Legal Dept.</span></span><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:7.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:7.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Consolas'>Phone - 650 485-6064</span><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><span lang=EN-AU><br><br><o:p></o:p></span></p><pre><span lang=EN-AU>_______________________________________________<o:p></o:p></span></pre><pre><span lang=EN-AU>Rt4-whois mailing list<o:p></o:p></span></pre><pre><span lang=EN-AU><a href="mailto:Rt4-whois@icann.org">Rt4-whois@icann.org</a><o:p></o:p></span></pre><pre><span lang=EN-AU><a href="https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/rt4-whois">https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/rt4-whois</a><o:p></o:p></span></pre><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><span lang=EN-AU><br><br><o:p></o:p></span></p><pre><span lang=EN-AU>-- <o:p></o:p></span></pre><pre><span lang=EN-AU><o:p> </o:p></span></pre><pre><span lang=EN-AU><o:p> </o:p></span></pre><p><span lang=EN-AU><br><b>-------------------------------------------------------------------------------</b><br>NOTICE: This email message is for the sole use of the intended recipient(s) <br>and may contain confidential and privileged information. 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