Hi Kathy<div><br></div><div>Excellent job spotting this. Thank you for your proposal which looks very sensible, and provides clarity and Mikhail points out.</div><div><br></div><div>So, Alice, please would you change the word 'tables' to 'provides' in recommendation 16 as described in Kathy's mail.</div>
<div><br></div><div>Kind regards</div><div><br></div><div>Emily<span></span></div><div><br>On Thursday, May 3, 2012, Kathy Kleiman wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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Hi All,<br>
What a tour de force! It's really coming together. Thanks for all
the hard work of everyone on the call last night.<br>
<br>
Quick question: can we flip the final two recommendations, and make
a one word change -- the word tables? I think it may mean something
different in different cultures. In the US, if you "table" a motion,
you put it aside and don't act on it. Since we certainly want people
to act on it here, I would like to propose the words "provides" or
"lays out" instead. <br>
<br>
Best, Kathy<br>
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CURRENT ==><br>
Recommendation 15: Annual Status Reports<br>
ICANN should provide at least annual written status reports on its
progress towards implementing the recommendations of this WHOIS
Review Team. The first of these reports should be published one
year, at the latest, after ICANN tables the implementation plan
mentioned in recommendation 16. Each of these reports should contain
all relevant information, including all underlying facts, figures
and analyses.<br>
<br>
Recommendation 16: Detailed and Comprehensive Plan<br>
ICANN should provide a detailed and comprehensive plan within 3
months after the submission of the Final WHOIS Review Team report
that outlines how ICANN will move forward in implementing these
recommendations. <br>
<br>
<br>
OFFERED ==><br>
Recommendation 15: Detailed and Comprehensive Plan<br>
ICANN should provide a detailed and comprehensive plan within 3
months after the submission of the Final WHOIS Review Team report
that outlines how ICANN will move forward in implementing these
recommendations. <br>
<br>
Recommendation 16: Annual Status Reports<br>
ICANN should provide at least annual written status reports on its
progress towards implementing the recommendations of this WHOIS
Review Team. The first of these reports should be published one
year, at the latest, after ICANN <i><b>tables </b></i>the
implementation plan mentioned in <b><i>recommendation 15, above</i></b>.
Each of these reports should contain all relevant information,
including all underlying facts, figures and analyses.<br>
<br>
<br>
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