And to me, thank you Susan<br><br><br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On 2 May 2012 20:25, Susan Kawaguchi <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:susank@fb.com" target="_blank">susank@fb.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<div>I have quickly reviewed the chapter edits and insertion of Steve Crocker's comments. The only comments I have relate to page 26 </div>
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</span></span></span><span style="font-family:Calibri">Data accuracy – In 2009-10, ICANN commissioned a study on data accuracy, which was undertaken by the National Opinion Research Council of the University of Chicago (NORC) (the “NORC WHOIS Data Accuracy
Study 2009/10”).<span> </span>The study found that only 23% of WHOIS records were
<a>fully accurate
</a></span><span><span style="font-size:8pt;font-family:'Times New Roman'"><a href="#1370f04c73898cbb__msocom_1" language="JavaScript" name="1370f04c73898cbb__msoanchor_1">[SMR1]</a><span> </span></span></span><span style="font-family:Calibri">and
over 20% were completely inaccurate.<span> </span><a>The</a></span><span><span style="font-size:8pt;font-family:'Times New Roman'" lang="X-NONE"><a href="#1370f04c73898cbb__msocom_2" language="JavaScript" name="1370f04c73898cbb__msoanchor_2">[Sk2]</a><span> </span></span></span><span style="font-family:Calibri">
low level of accurate WHOIS data is unacceptable, and decreases consumer trust in the WHOIS, in the industry of which ICANN is a quasi-regulator, and therefore in ICANN itself.<span>
</span>The organisation’s priority in relation to WHOIS should be to improve WHOIS data accuracy and sustain improvement over time.<span>
</span>It should develop a methodology to measure overall accuracy, publish performance targets, and actively collaborate with registrars and registrants to improve data accuracy.</span></span></div>
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the corresponding recommendation we changed the terms to those defined in the NORC study.<span>
</span>Do we want to use that vocabulary here along with the definitions from the NORC study or leave this paragraph as it is.<span>
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<p><b><span lang="X-NONE">No Failure</span></b><span lang="X-NONE"> Met all three criteria fully – deliverable address, name linked to address, and registrant confrimed ownership and correctness of
all details during interview<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p><span lang="X-NONE">Full failure – Failed on all criteria – undeliverable address and unlinkable, missing, or patently false name, unable to locate to interview<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p><span lang="X-NONE">In the corresponding recommendation we changed the terms to those defined in the NORC study.<span>
</span>Do we want to use that vocabulary here along with the definitions from the NORC study or leave this paragraph as it is.<span>
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<p><b><span lang="X-NONE">No Failure</span></b><span lang="X-NONE"> Met all three criteria fully – deliverable address, name linked to address, and registrant confrimed ownership and correctness of
all details during interview<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p><span lang="X-NONE"><b>Full failure</b> – Failed on all criteria – undeliverable address and unlinkable, missing, or patently false name, unable to locate to interview<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p><span lang="X-NONE">I have suggested a revision below in yellow. </span></p>
<p><span lang="X-NONE"><span style="font-family:Verdana;font-size:16px"><span><span><span style="font:normal normal normal 7pt/normal 'Times New Roman'"> </span></span></span><span style="font-family:Calibri">Data
accuracy – In 2009-10, ICANN commissioned a study on data accuracy, which was undertaken by the National Opinion Research Council of the University of Chicago (NORC) (the “NORC WHOIS Data Accuracy Study 2009/10”).<span> </span><span style="background-color:rgb(250,255,0)">The
study found that only 23% of WHOIS records met the study's criteria for No Failure</span></span><span><span style="font-size:8pt;font-family:'Times New Roman'"><span style="background-color:rgb(250,255,0)"> </span></span></span><span style="font-family:Calibri"><span style="background-color:rgb(250,255,0)">and
over 20% were categorized as Full Failure.</span><span><span style="background-color:rgb(250,255,0)"> </span> </span><a>The</a></span><span><span style="font-size:8pt;font-family:'Times New Roman'" lang="X-NONE"><a href="#1370f04c73898cbb__msocom_2" language="JavaScript" name="1370f04c73898cbb__msoanchor_2" style="color:blue;text-decoration:underline">[</a></span></span><span style="font-family:Calibri">low
level of accurate WHOIS data is unacceptable, and decreases consumer trust in the WHOIS, in the industry of which ICANN is a quasi-regulator, and therefore in ICANN itself.<span> </span>The organisation’s priority in relation to WHOIS should be to improve
WHOIS data accuracy and sustain improvement over time.<span> </span>It should develop a methodology to measure overall accuracy, publish performance targets, and actively collaborate with registrars and registrants to improve data accuracy.</span></span></span></p>
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<div style="font-size:14px;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><font color="rgb(0, 0, 0)"><font face="Calibri">I am open to changing it to something similar to what I have suggested or leaving it as it since
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Seth M Reiss <<a href="mailto:seth.reiss@lex-ip.com" target="_blank">seth.reiss@lex-ip.com</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Tue, 1 May 2012 19:46:12 -1000<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>'Alice Jansen' <<a href="mailto:alice.jansen@icann.org" target="_blank">alice.jansen@icann.org</a>>, <<a href="mailto:rt4-whois@icann.org" target="_blank">rt4-whois@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>Re: [Rt4-whois] Agenda - call on 2 May - 06:00 UTC<br>
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<a href="mailto:rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">mailto:rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Alice Jansen<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, April 30, 2012 11:53 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:rt4-whois@icann.org" target="_blank">rt4-whois@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Rt4-whois] Agenda - call on 2 May - 06:00 UTC<br>
<b>Importance:</b> High<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">As you know, your next call is scheduled for Wednesday, 2 May at 06:00 UTC (time converter:</span><span><b><u><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><a href="http://timeanddate.com/worldclock/fixedtime.html?msg=WHOIS+RT+-+2+May+-+06%3A00+UTC&iso=20120502T06&ah=1&am=30" target="_blank">http://timeanddate.com/worldclock/fixedtime.html?msg=WHOIS+RT+-+2+May+-+06%3A00+UTC&iso=20120502T06&ah=1&am=30</a></span></u></b></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">)<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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