[Ssr2-coordination] Draft SSR2 communiqué

Jennifer Bryce jennifer.bryce at icann.org
Thu Jun 15 16:40:20 UTC 2017

Hi all,

Thanks for the input. I added the hyperlinks to the final draft version. Before I distribute a clean version to the group please acknowledge -

Regarding the name of the review and the request to adopt ‘Security Review’ in public communications - I talked with comms about this and we can’t adopt a different name. This is reflected in the attached document. While it’s a valid concern that for people outside of ICANN, SSR2 doesn't mean anything, we alleviate this by referencing the full name of the Review (with the acronym in parenthesis) in all of our comms. It’s a standard ICANN best practice to do this. In addition, SSR2 follows a similar format to ATRT2, At-Large2, RSSAC2 and other Reviews. If we make changes to Review acronyms we will lose this uniformity and the value that comes with it.

For distribution to SO/AC leaders, we work with the Policy team who distribute to their respective groups.

Hope all of this is clear - let me know if you have questions.


From: <ssr2-coordination-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Denise Michel <denisemichel at fb.com>
Date: Thursday, June 15, 2017 at 8:27 AM
To: "ssr2-coordination at icann.org" <ssr2-coordination at icann.org>
Subject: Re: [Ssr2-coordination] Draft SSR2 communiqué

Thanks Emily & Eric.

Jennifer – Please add links to the attached and send to Team list for any suggested edits. Let’s aim to publish in 2 days on our wiki.

Please reply on my SO/AC question when you have a chance.


Denise Michel
Domain Name System Strategy & Management
Facebook, Inc.
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From: Eric Osterweil <eosterweil at verisign.com>
Date: Thursday, June 15, 2017 at 7:48 AM
To: Emily Taylor <emily.taylor at oxil.co.uk>, Denise Michel <denisemichel at fb.com>
Cc: "ssr2-coordination at icann.org" <ssr2-coordination at icann.org>
Subject: Re: [Ssr2-coordination] Draft SSR2 communiqué

I’m fine with the changes, thanks for all of the hard work!


From: <ssr2-coordination-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Emily Taylor <emily.taylor at oxil.co.uk>
Date: Thursday, June 15, 2017 at 4:41 AM
To: Denise Michel <denisemichel at fb.com>
Cc: "ssr2-coordination at icann.org" <ssr2-coordination at icann.org>
Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [Ssr2-coordination] Draft SSR2 communiqué

Hi Denise and Jennifer

Thank you for your work on the draft. It reads well. I made some very minor tweaks towards the end, and am happy for it to go out, after the highlighted hyperlinks have been added.

Best wishes


On Thu, Jun 15, 2017 at 1:44 AM, Denise Michel <denisemichel at fb.com<mailto:denisemichel at fb.com>> wrote:
Jennifer -- Thank you for the draft communique.  Attached is a clean and redline version reflecting my edits.

Would you please add links where text is highlighted (let me know if you have questions).

Would you please make sure the “Background” page on the wiki contains all material, including briefings, provided to the Team?

Please remind me how you distribute this to the SOs/ACs?

Emily & Eric – please weigh-in with your edits/thoughts.  I’ve revised the draft to try to make it a bit more accessible and succinct. Note context added on subtopics. Once all of us are satisfied, I suggest we put it on the Team list for a couple days to give others an opportunity to weigh-in.


Denise Michel
Domain Name System Strategy & Management
Facebook, Inc.
denisemichel at fb.com<mailto:denisemichel at fb.com>

From: <ssr2-coordination-bounces at icann.org<mailto:ssr2-coordination-bounces at icann.org>> on behalf of Jennifer Bryce <jennifer.bryce at icann.org<mailto:jennifer.bryce at icann.org>>
Date: Friday, June 2, 2017 at 8:22 AM
To: "ssr2-coordination at icann.org<mailto:ssr2-coordination at icann.org>" <ssr2-coordination at icann.org<mailto:ssr2-coordination at icann.org>>
Subject: [Ssr2-coordination] Draft SSR2 communiqué

Hi Emily, Eric, Denise

Per the action item for staff, attached is a draft communiqué for the Review Team to send to SO/ACs ahead of the Johannesburg meeting. Please review and share your input.


Jennifer Bryce
Senior Reviews Coordinator
Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)

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