[Ssr2-review] SSR2-RT TermsofReference - Initial Draft

Denise Michel denisemichel at fb.com
Tue Apr 11 07:56:56 UTC 2017


I’ve added additional comments and edits in the attached.

I suggest we focus our efforts (and discussions) on the “scope of work” part of the document, which needs a great deal of work ;)

Best,
Denise

Denise Michel
Domain Name System Strategy & Management
Facebook, Inc.
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From: <ssr2-review-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Kaveh Ranjbar <kaveh.ranjbar at board.icann.org>
Date: Friday, April 7, 2017 at 6:04 AM
To: SSR2 <SSR2-review at icann.org>
Subject: Re: [Ssr2-review] SSR2-RT TermsofReference - Initial Draft

Thank you James,

Please find my comments and suggestions in addition to James comments, in the attached file.

All the best,
Kaveh.


> On 5 Apr 2017, at 18:55, James Gannon <james at cyberinvasion.net> wrote:
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> PFA my redline.
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> -James
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> On 05/04/2017, 15:01, "ssr2-review-bounces at icann.org on behalf of Karen Mulberry" <ssr2-review-bounces at icann.org on behalf of karen.mulberry at icann.org> wrote:
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>> Geoff,
>>
>> To answer your question, yes ICANN staff is a resource that the RT can consult with as well as to ask for briefings on areas of interest to the team. The list that was provided in the draft ToR was captured from some initial exchanges from the RT and was meant to be the starting point for the discussion.
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>> Thanks for noting the addition for the list.
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>> Karen Mulberry
>> Multistakeholder Strategy and Strategic Initiatives (MSSI)
>> ICANN
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>> On 4/4/17, 7:39 PM, "ssr2-review-bounces at icann.org on behalf of Geoff Huston" <ssr2-review-bounces at icann.org on behalf of gih at apnic.net> wrote:
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>>   Thanks indeed for circulating this Bernie - it is most helpful in terms of grounding some of the thoughts and forming a basis for determining a course to engage with a feasible review program with reasonable timelines and milestones.
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>>   I particularly appreciate the section"Focus of the SSR2 – Scope of Work“
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>>   Personally I would be happy to see this enumeration of questions for the body of the SSR2 study, as it appears to strike a good balance in building on the SSR1 work, and looking at the changes to the environment in a post-transition ICANN. At the same time this document brings together a concrete set of questions that are not open ended but can form the basis of the SSR2 study
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>>   One very minor question - in the "list of communities that the SSR2-RT may consult with” I am assuming that the resource of ICANN’s staff are also included, even though they are not explicitly listed, specifically including the manager of PTI, the CTO, the CSSO (If that’s John Crain’s appropriate title) and other security expert staff, such as Dave Piscatello. Would I be correct in making that assumption?
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>>   kind regards,
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>>      Geoff Huston
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>>> On 5 Apr 2017, at 12:24 am, Bernard Turcotte <turcotte.bernard at gmail.com> wrote:
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>>> All,
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>>> At the request of the Co-Chairs please find attached an initial draft (straw man) of the Review Team Terms of Reference to be discussed at your next RT meeting.
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>>> Bernard Turcotte
>>> ICANN Staff Support to the SSR2
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