[Ssr2-review] [EXT] Re: ACTION NEEDED: Input to SO/AC response note

Sat Nov 4 16:27:14 UTC 2017

Dear Co-chair,

I have seen an informal communication sent to SO/AC chairs. I am in
support of the sent communication because it convey the same message I
intended to draft.

Regarding the input for the Scope, I fully support editing from Kerry
to be taken as an improvement of the draft that was shared.

Regards,
Matogoro

On 11/3/17, Matogoro Jabera <jaberamatogoro at gmail.com> wrote:
> I rather see strong message from Kerry re-phrasing than the one was
> proposed before. I will share my edits that will remove the phrasing
> as I opposed during our meeting.
>
>
> Regards,
> Matogoro
>
> On 11/3/17, Geoff Huston <gih at apnic.net> wrote:
>> I oppose these proposed changes. As it stands, its a simple note carrying
>> a
>> very simple message, expressed simply, and I for one don’t see a pressing
>> need for more adjectives here.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>> On 3 Nov 2017, at 7:01 pm, Barrett, Kerry-Ann <KABarrett at oas.org> wrote:
>>>
>>> Dear Team
>>>
>>> Thank you for the dedicated work and please see some suggestions below
>>> to
>>> the language in red (which does not affect the essence of what was
>>> intended to be conveyed).  Please feel free to accept or reject
>>> suggestions.
>>>
>>>
>>> Sincerely,
>>> Kerry-Ann Barrett
>>> Cyber Security Policy Specialist
>>> Inter-American Committee against Terrorism
>>> Secretariat for Multidimensional Security
>>> Organization of American States
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>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: ssr2-review-bounces at icann.org
>>> [mailto:ssr2-review-bounces at icann.org]
>>> On Behalf Of Boban Krsic
>>> Sent: Friday, November 3, 2017 9:31 AM
>>> To: ssr2-review at icann.org
>>> Subject: [EXT] Re: [Ssr2-review] ACTION NEEDED: Input to SO/AC response
>>> note
>>>
>>> Hi Folks,
>>>
>>> I have no comments or additions - it looks good to me.
>>>
>>> Thanks and many greetings to Abu Dhabi.
>>>
>>>                 - Boban.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Am 03.11.17 um 12:32 schrieb Jennifer Bryce:
>>> > Hi all,
>>> >
>>> > The below draft note to SO/AC Chairs was developed by the RT members
>>> > during the F2F meeting today. Please read, and share any edits or
>>> > input
>>> > by 23.59 UTC on Sunday 5 November.
>>> >
>>> >
>>> > ------------------
>>> >
>>> > Dear SO/AC Chairs;
>>> >
>>> > Please find enclosed a description of the SSR2 Review Team’s
>>> > perspective
>>> > the Scope of this review.  As requested, the SSR2 is completing
>>> > requested item to “[resolve] the issues identified and discussed
>>> > before
>>> > and during ICANN60 related to scope”.
>>> >
>>> > Scope
>>> > The SSR2 RT has operated and conducted its work according to its
>>> > adopted
>>> > scope (detailed in its Terms of
>>> > Reference<https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/64076120/SSR2-TermsofReference-CLEAN%20v4.0%20ET.docx?version=1&modificationDate=1493887766000&api=v2>
>>> > document), which was adopted by consensus of the SSR RT on 4 May 2017.
>>> >
>>> > We would like to offer some general clarifications and comments about
>>> > the choices in an overview on the overarching tenets that was adopted
>>> > and guided the approach to the development of the scope that we hope
>>> > will be helpful to the SO and AC chairs in considering the parameters
>>> > associated with resuming this effort:
>>> >
>>> > Breadth vs. Depth: We believe in such a review, that it is more
>>> > helpful
>>> > to look at breadth and look at the broader aspects of security,
>>> > stability and resiliency rather than dive into depth in just a small
>>> > number of issues.  This approach we believe would lend itself to more
>>> > informed conclusions that can be contextualized.  We have operated as
>>> > a
>>> > team that while we may review a plethora of documents, we have a
>>> > fiduciary responsibility to the Community –at-Large to contribute to
>>> > the
>>> > stability of ICANN through sound conclusions and recommendations.
>>> >
>>> > Capability vs. Behaviours: We believe that it is more helpful in the
>>> > context of this review to look at the capability of ICANN to manage
>>> > issues related to security, stability and resilience rather than being
>>> > overly prescriptive as to how ICANN should respond to particular
>>> > circumstances that have arisen in the past or may arise in the future.
>>> > In this context, our review will also include future threats for
>>> > consideration and proactive planning .
>>> >
>>> > Perspective vs. Prescription: We believe that it is more helpful to
>>> > review aspects of institutional awareness and capability of topics
>>> > related to security, stability, and resiliency, rather than provide a
>>> > detailed prescription of the appropriate responses to be used in
>>> > particular cases.
>>> >
>>> > We hope this meets your requirements regarding the review team’s
>>> > perspective on the scope of this review. The current working terms of
>>> > references for the review team’s efforts up to the point of this pause
>>> > in our actions, including a detailed view of the scope of the review,
>>> > can be found in the reference document cited above.
>>> >
>>> > Please let us know if you require anything further.
>>> >
>>> > Regards,
>>> >
>>> > The Second Security, Stability, and Resiliency Review Team (SSR2 RT)
>>> >
>>> >
>>> >
>>> > --
>>> > Jennifer Bryce
>>> > Senior Reviews Coordinator
>>> > Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)
>>> >
>>> > Email: jennifer.bryce at icann.org
>>> > Skype: jennifer.bryce.icann
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>>> >
>>> >
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MATOGORO Jabhera
Assistant Lecturer & Coordinator - Microsoft Innovation Center, Tanzania
College of Informatics and Virtual Education
The University of Dodoma (www.udom.ac.tz)