[Ssr2-review] [EXT] Re: Draft Blog and SO/AC Chair Letter -- edits bySept. 2

[Ramkrishna Pariyar]

Dear all

The draft seems ok.

Regards
Ram Krishna Pariyar



On Sun, 2 Sep 2018, 6:52 pm Barrett, Kerry-Ann, <KABarrett at oas.org> wrote:

> Dear All
>
> The draft seemed fine to me as well taking into account comments mentioned
> by Russ below.
>
> Sincerely,
> Kerry-Ann
>
> On Sep 2, 2018, at 3:45 PM, Naveed Bin Rais <naveedbinrais at gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
> Draft looks fine to me, though a little long.
>
> Just an inquiry. Is it fine to mention affiliations of SO/AC with each new
> member (in parenthesis) in the draft?
>
> Cheers,
> Naveed -
>
> On Sun, Sep 2, 2018 at 8:16 PM Russ Housley <housley at vigilsec.com> wrote:
>
>> Thanks for the pointers to other blogs.  The CCT RT put a picture at the
>> top of their blog, and that seems appropriate for the "re-start" message
>> here.
>>
>> Thanks for putting this together.  I have attached some editorial
>> suggestions in the attachment. None are big.  Accept or reject to easily
>> accommodate the suggestions by others.
>>
>> Russ
>>
>>
>> On Aug 31, 2018, at 3:34 PM, Denise Michel <denisemichel at fb.com> wrote:
>>
>> Hi, All.
>>
>> As discussed on our call, I rewrote the draft “communiqué” kindly
>> provided by Staff, to bring it in-line with the more “approachable” blogs
>> that are the standard for review teams (e.g. see RDS Review Team blog
>> <https://www.icann.org/news/blog/rds-whois2-review-team-submits-terms-of-reference-and-work-plan>
>>  and CCT Review Team blog
>> <https://www.icann.org/news/blog/update-on-competition-consumer-trust-and-consumer-choice-review>).
>> The attached blog, once finalized, would be posted on the Team wiki and
>> shared with the SO/AC Chairs.
>>
>> I’ve also drafted an email for Russ to transmit to the SO/AC Chairs (w/
>> Board Committee Chair and Phil on cc) to formally close the loop with them
>> on the “re-start” tasks they assigned. It follows the blog text in the
>> attached.
>>
>> Red-line edits are welcomed. *Can we agree to share them on the list by
>> Sunday night (PT) Sept. 2?* That will give us time to resolve any issues
>> and generate final documents for transmission by Sept. 4
>>
>> Thanks!
>> Denise
>>
>> Denise Michel
>> Director, Domain Name System Strategy & Management
>> Facebook, Inc.
>> *denisemichel at fb.com <denisemichel at fb.com>*
>>
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