[Ssr2-review] SSR2 recommended actions to complete SSR1

[Denise Michel]

Hi. As I understand it, the recommendation – fully implement the previous SSR1 recommendations – is in the body of the report.  More details on what that means for each and every recommendation is in the annex.  I support this construct.

It tracks with keeping the information that’s most important for community engagement in the body of the report, keeping the body as streamlined as possible, and putting the rest in the annex.

Best,
Denise

Denise Michel
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From: Ssr2-review <ssr2-review-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Heather Flanagan <hlf at sphericalcowconsulting.com>
Date: Wednesday, February 19, 2020 at 9:50 AM
To: SSR2 <ssr2-review at icann.org>
Subject: [Ssr2-review] SSR2 recommended actions to complete SSR1

Hello SSR2 Review Team,

As a result of today’s call, I’ve copied over the contents of the SSR2 recommended actions to complete SSR1 into the Appendix D: Findings Related to SSR1. I’ve also added the specific recommended action to each SSR1 Recommendation, so it can be viewed in context. The new content has not been edited beyond basic spell checking.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10U0rR1bPIQo-OSOqLpYGWDXmNGFX-tyW/edit#<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_10U0rR1bPIQo-2DOSOqLpYGWDXmNGFX-2DtyW_edit-23&d=DwMFaQ&c=5VD0RTtNlTh3ycd41b3MUw&r=MWVuq3jZIw5gwhGdDf-HWNL4CEWIsdUnt9gOgplCArM&m=ZHUa87RDw-IDv9s2-aL2joWjEvhqa38sYJ2pICKamS4&s=WUNxMbLhTXH9-EWM_RIa8jChJCZN4_TXDZ-Nkp_AQrg&e=>

After viewing these in context, is there a step where we need to officially call consensus on the new recommendations?

Also, it’s important to note that we now have recommendations in an appendix and not in the body of the text. Kc has already pointed out that’s a problem; I agree.  Is it time for Appendix D to go back to being a section in the body of the document?




Thanks! Heather
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