[Ssr2-review] Please review the abuse section

[Russ Housley]

REMINDER: Please enter all editorial suggestion (in suggest mode) and comments before the team call on November 5th.

Russ


> From: "Weissinger, Laurin" <laurin.weissinger at yale.edu <mailto:laurin.weissinger at yale.edu>>
> Subject: [Ssr2-review] Abuse section redesign
> Date: October 28, 2020 at 2:12:53 PM EDT
> To: SSR2 Review <ssr2-review at icann.org <mailto:ssr2-review at icann.org>>
> 
> Dear all, 
> 
> Please see here for the reworked abuse section, to be discussed on tomorrow’s call: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PdjkR6i_FdXuFTomxptVpLVVtORRTgrrnVQ-vSpmGGQ/edit# <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PdjkR6i_FdXuFTomxptVpLVVtORRTgrrnVQ-vSpmGGQ/edit#> (suggest only)
> 
> You can see the new structure involves a longer, general findings section, followed by a section with recommendations, interspersed with some specific findings and our (proposed) outlook and expectations. 
> 
> Please comment and suggest changes, as always use suggest mode only. Heather is still actively working in this document because the subteam did a lot of work that took some time. Thus, please excuse white spaces, etc  
> 
> Tomorrow, we can discuss the broader changes and agree if this makes sense, and get some discussion and maybe consensus on how to move forward.
> 
> All the best
> Laurin 

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