[Ssr2-review] Rec 21

[Eric Osterweil]

Hi all,

Please take a look at updated text on recommendation 21.2 in this document:
	https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FaGlYsLVSob_CflYkKBag4L27vMUNA0C0kVNtAI0KEI/edit?pli=1#

Thank you,

Eric