[Ssr2-review] For Review: SSR2 Final Report

[Russ Housley]

I reviewed the redlines.  Something is wrong with the wording starting on page 52 for two or three pages.  In the attachment, I offer corrections.

I also have two questions:

1) Regarding "Emergency Back-end Registry Operator (EBERO)", should it be Back-End to match the capitalization in the acronym?

2) Will Table 1 be scaled down to fit the page width?

Russ



> On Jan 20, 2021, at 2:46 PM, Jennifer Bryce <jennifer.bryce at icann.org> wrote:
> 
> Dear SSR2 Review Team members,
>  
> For your review by 17:00 UTC on Friday 22 January:
>  
> Attached, please find the final report in the template. This version incorporates edits from the comms proofing. You can see the changes in the redline version attached. Please let me know if you see anything that hasn’t translated to the template properly, or anything amiss in the proofing. 
>  
> After the Friday deadline I will work with Russ to get the report submitted to the Board. Thanks in advance for taking the time to review this final, proofed version.
>  
> FYI – the final report will be translated into the 5 UN languages. I’ll share these with the team once they are available.
>  
> Best,
> Jennifer
> -- 
> Jennifer Bryce
> Project Manager, Review Support and Accountability
> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)
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