[Ssr2-review] [Ext] Re: For Review: SSR2 Final Report

[Jennifer Bryce]

Hi Russ,

Thanks for confirming. One other minor edit is included in the redline attached, as flagged by Heather – the SSR2 recommendations summary table (p7) didn’t previously have a #, so it’s now labelled ‘table 1’. The SSR1 recommendations summary, previously table 1, is now table 2.

Best,
Jennifer
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From: Russ Housley <housley at vigilsec.com>
Date: Thursday, 21 January 2021 at 07:15
To: Jennifer Bryce <jennifer.bryce at icann.org>
Cc: ICANN SSR2 <ssr2-review at icann.org>
Subject: Re: [Ext] Re: [Ssr2-review] For Review: SSR2 Final Report

Jennifer:

Thanks for the review and revised wording. I’ll incorporate this adjustment unless other RT members comment. Regarding your questions:

1) Regarding "Emergency Back-end Registry Operator (EBERO)", should it be Back-End to match the capitalization in the acronym? – Comms pointed me to this page, which is the usage they are following:https://www.icann.org/resources/pages/ebero-2013-04-02-en [icann.org]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/www.icann.org/resources/pages/ebero-2013-04-02-en__;!!PtGJab4!ulBXZOSUya6m8qLcYEPeufMNcInAmpcxMMeJFYUI01C9hawc1r1fL4IzZ0LV34TMIbs7iHi5gw$>

Okay.  That is clear enough.


2) Will Table 1 be scaled down to fit the page width? See p19 for how it looks in PDF format.

Okay.  That works, just barely making it.

Russ

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