<div>No, although I won’t argue my reasons. The more we explain, the more we put ourselves in a defensive position. I also have a severe aversion to work measurement slogans and acronyms. It goes back at least to TQM, the earliest that comes to mind, and has continued through SMART. I’m fairly certain it will go on when another consultant-driven fad supersedes SMART. <br><br>Don</div><div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div>On Tue, Nov 7, 2017 at 2:34 PM Osterweil, Eric via Ssr2-review <<a href="mailto:ssr2-review@icann.org">ssr2-review@icann.org</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<b>Date: </b>Tuesday, November 7, 2017 at 2:33 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>SSR2 <<a href="mailto:ssr2-review@icann.org" target="_blank">ssr2-review@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[EXTERNAL] Re: [Ssr2-review] Scope document - action needed<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Nov 7, 2017, at 2:12 PM, Denise Michel <<a href="mailto:denisemichel@fb.com" target="_blank">denisemichel@fb.com</a>> wrote:<u></u><u></u></p>
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<span style="font-size:14.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Dear SO/AC Chairs;</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:14.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Please find enclosed a description of the SSR2 Review Team’s perspective of the scope of this review. As requested, the SSR2 is completing the requested item to “[</span><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:"Times",serif">resolve]
the issues identified and discussed before and during ICANN60 related to scope.”</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:14.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">We hope this meets your requirements regarding the Review Team’s perspective on the scope of this review. The current Terms of Reference for SSR2’s efforts up to the point of this pause in our actions,
including a detailed view of the scope of the review, can be found<span class="m_8378016124857272350apple-converted-space"> </span><span style="color:#103cc0">here</span>. Additional information on SSR2 activities, including the work plan can be found on the Review Team’s<span class="m_8378016124857272350apple-converted-space"> </span><span style="color:#103cc0">wiki</span>.</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:14.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Please let us know if you require anything further. Regards,</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:14.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">The Second Security, Stability, and Resiliency of the DNS Review Team (SSR2)</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#535353">Scope</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">The Security, Stability and Resiliency of the DNS Review Team (SSR2 or Review Team) has operated and conducted its work according to its adopted scope (detailed in its<span class="m_8378016124857272350apple-converted-space"> </span><span style="color:#103cc0">Terms
of Reference<span class="m_8378016124857272350apple-converted-space"> </span></span>document), which was adopted by consensus of the Review Team on 4 May 2017.</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">We would like to offer an overview on the overarching tenets that were adopted and that guided the development of the scope of this review that we hope will be helpful to the SO and AC chairs in
considering the parameters associated with resuming this effort:<span class="m_8378016124857272350apple-converted-space"> </span></span><span style="font-size:12.0pt"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Breadth vs. Depth: In such a review, we believe that it is, in general, more helpful to look at breadth and the broader aspects of security, stability and resiliency rather than dive into depth in
just a small number of issues. We believe this approach will lend itself to more informed conclusions that can be contextualized.</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Capability vs. Behaviors: We believe that it is more helpful in the context of this review to look at the capability of ICANN to manage issues related to security, stability and resiliency rather
than being overly prescriptive as to how ICANN should respond to particular circumstances that have arisen in the past or may arise in the future.</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Perspective vs. Prescription: We believe that it is more helpful to review aspects of institutional awareness and capability with respect to topics related to security, stability, and resiliency,
rather than provide a detailed prescription of the appropriate responses to be used in particular cases.</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Mindful of the Board’s and Staff’s advice regarding the need for implementable recommendations, the Review Team will strive to provide recommendations that are specific, measurable, attainable, realistic,
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<b>Date:<span class="m_8378016124857272350apple-converted-space"> </span></b>Monday, November 6, 2017 at 3:46 PM<br>
<b>To:<span class="m_8378016124857272350apple-converted-space"> </span></b>SSR2 <<a href="mailto:ssr2-review@icann.org" target="_blank"><span style="color:#954f72">ssr2-review@icann.org</span></a>><br>
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