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<p class="MsoNormal">It was great to reconnect with you and meet the new members. I have included some minor edits for your consideration (including capturing suggested updates). They are in red-line text in the attached.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Laurin – thanks, again, for holding the pen on this!<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Ssr2-review <ssr2-review-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Kerry-Ann Barrett <kerryann.barrett@gmail.com><br>
<b>Date: </b>Saturday, August 25, 2018 at 5:49 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>"Weissinger, Laurin" <laurin.weissinger@yale.edu><br>
<b>Cc: </b>SSR2 <ssr2-review@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [Ssr2-review] Notes on Terms of Reference<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Just wanted to encourage us to include in the footer language similar to ‘As updated during Face to Face held August 22-24,2018’ or language that has an effective date of adoption by the team of the updated version.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Also, we were focused on the early paragraphs and we missed updating the sections below extracted from page 6 that speak to Leadership and Co- Chairs. We could consider deleting and replacing with text that reflect the current leads and
replacing the words co-chairs with the chair and vice chair language as appropriate. This is the text as is:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Decisions of the SSR2-RT will be made at meetings, either face-to- face or via teleconference (teleconference or Adobe), and via the SSR2-RT’s email list, as requested by the
Co-Chairs. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<h3><span style="font-size:14.0pt">Leadership</span><o:p></o:p></h3>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">At its meeting on March 22 2017 the SSR2-RT selected by consensus Denise Michel, Emily Taylor and Eric Osterweil as Co-Chairs.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Responsibilities of the Co-Chairs include:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Symbol">·</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt"> </span><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Remain neutral when serving as Co-Chair</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Symbol">·</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt"> </span><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Identify when speaking as an advocate</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Symbol">·</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt"> </span><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Maintain standards and focus on the aims of the Review Team as established in its Terms of Reference</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Drive toward delivery of key milestones according to the Work Plan</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Kerry-Ann<o:p></o:p></p>
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On Aug 24, 2018, at 3:36 PM, Weissinger, Laurin <<a href="mailto:laurin.weissinger@yale.edu">laurin.weissinger@yale.edu</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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Please see attached the updated draft for review and comment.<br>
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With many thanks and best wishes<br>
Laurin<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><SSR2-TermsofReference-team comments 23-Aug-18.docx><o:p></o:p></p>
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