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<div>The draft seemed fine to me as well taking into account comments mentioned by Russ below.<br>
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<div>Kerry-Ann</div>
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On Sep 2, 2018, at 3:45 PM, Naveed Bin Rais <<a href="mailto:naveedbinrais@gmail.com">naveedbinrais@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br>
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<div dir="ltr">Draft looks fine to me, though a little long.
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<div>Just an inquiry. Is it fine to mention affiliations of SO/AC with each new member (in parenthesis) in the draft?</div>
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<div>Cheers,</div>
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<div dir="ltr">On Sun, Sep 2, 2018 at 8:16 PM Russ Housley <<a href="mailto:housley@vigilsec.com">housley@vigilsec.com</a>> wrote:<br>
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<div style="word-wrap:break-word;line-break:after-white-space">Thanks for the pointers to other blogs. The CCT RT put a picture at the top of their blog, and that seems appropriate for the "re-start" message here.
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<div>Thanks for putting this together. I have attached some editorial suggestions in the attachment. None are big. Accept or reject to easily accommodate the suggestions by others.</div>
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<div>On Aug 31, 2018, at 3:34 PM, Denise Michel <<a href="mailto:denisemichel@fb.com" target="_blank">denisemichel@fb.com</a>> wrote:</div>
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<span style="font-size:11pt">Hi, All.<u></u><u></u></span></div>
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<span style="font-size:11pt">As discussed on our call, I rewrote the draft “communiqué” kindly provided by Staff, to bring it in-line with the more “approachable” blogs that are the standard for review teams (e.g. see RDS Review Team<span class="m_830913073664059824Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://www.icann.org/news/blog/rds-whois2-review-team-submits-terms-of-reference-and-work-plan" style="color:rgb(149,79,114);text-decoration:underline" target="_blank">blog</a><span class="m_830913073664059824Apple-converted-space"> </span>and
CCT Review Team<span class="m_830913073664059824Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://www.icann.org/news/blog/update-on-competition-consumer-trust-and-consumer-choice-review" style="color:rgb(149,79,114);text-decoration:underline" target="_blank">blog</a>).
The attached blog, once finalized, would be posted on the Team wiki and shared with the SO/AC Chairs. <u></u><u></u></span></div>
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<span style="font-size:11pt">I’ve also drafted an email for Russ to transmit to the SO/AC Chairs (w/ Board Committee Chair and Phil on cc) to formally close the loop with them on the “re-start” tasks they assigned. It follows the blog text in the attached.<u></u><u></u></span></div>
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<span style="font-size:11pt">Red-line edits are welcomed.<span class="m_830913073664059824Apple-converted-space"> </span><u>Can we agree to share them on the list by Sunday night (PT) Sept. 2?</u><span class="m_830913073664059824Apple-converted-space"> </span>That
will give us time to resolve any issues and generate final documents for transmission by Sept. 4<u></u><u></u></span></div>
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<span style="font-size:11pt">Thanks!<u></u><u></u></span></div>
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