<html><head><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body dir="auto">Thanks Heather. Agreed I was on the fence with the the latter ones as you said they had further qualifiers for what success looked like. We have crossed the finish line <br><br><div dir="ltr">Cheers<br><div>Kerry-Ann</div></div><div dir="ltr"><br><blockquote type="cite">On Jan 22, 2021, at 9:45 PM, Heather Flanagan <hlf@sphericalcowconsulting.com> wrote:<br><br></blockquote></div><blockquote type="cite"><div dir="ltr">
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<span style="font-family:Montserrat">Thank you for the thorough review! I agree that I somehow missed the legacy language in 8, 10, and 13. I do think that the extended context around that language in 9 and 15 suggests they should be left as they are.</span></div>
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<div name="messageReplySection">On Jan 22, 2021, 8:27 AM -0800, Barrett, Kerry-Ann <KABarrett@oas.org>, wrote:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Copied in Heather just to check on something. Recs. 8.1, 9, 10, 13 and 15 – still have the legacy language similar to ‘This recommendation requires action from ICANN Board and ICANN Org.’</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Aside from those we can do a last scan but I picked up on those.</span></p>
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<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, January 20, 2021 6:10 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com><br>
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<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Ssr2-review] [Ext] Re: For Review: SSR2 Final Report</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" xml:lang="EN-GB">Thanks for the review and revised wording. I’ll incorporate this adjustment unless other RT members comment. Regarding your questions:</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" xml:lang="EN-GB">1) Regarding "Emergency Back-end Registry Operator (EBERO)", should it be Back-End to match the capitalization in the acronym? – <span style="color:red">Comms pointed me to this page, which is the usage they are following: <a href="https://www.icann.org/resources/pages/ebero-2013-04-02-en">https://www.icann.org/resources/pages/ebero-2013-04-02-en</a></span></span></p>
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<b>To:</b> Jennifer Bryce <<a href="mailto:jennifer.bryce@icann.org">jennifer.bryce@icann.org</a>><br>
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