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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple style='word-wrap:break-word'><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=SR-LATN-RS style='font-family:"Roboto Light"'>CONGRATULATIONS!<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=SR-LATN-RS style='font-family:"Roboto Light"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=SR-LATN-RS style='font-family:"Roboto Light"'>Many thanks to the </span><span style='font-family:"Roboto Light"'>whole SSR2 Review team, especially the leadership, implementation shepherds, and dear Heather. This has been a long and winding road. I joined rather late, but I hope that I was at least a bit useful. I am fully aware of the enormous effort that you built in this report. I assure you the whole Board fully appreciates it. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Roboto Light"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Roboto Light"'>My thank you also goes to the Org support team. I know that next significant part of the work is in front of you, the Board is looking forward to the scorecard on the report, but I am sure you will have full support by the shepherds. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Roboto Light"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Roboto Light"'>The final report has reached the Board list, we will process these important recommendations with our full attention, and within the bylaws mandated process and timing. Implementation of this review will significantly improve the SSR mandate of the ICANN and the whole Internet.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Roboto Light"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='background:white'><span lang=SR-LATN-RS style='font-family:"Roboto Light";color:black'>Best, <b><i>Danko Jevtović</i></b></span><b><i><span lang=SR-LATN-RS style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Roboto Light"'><o:p></o:p></span></i></b></p><p class=MsoNormal style='background:white'><span lang=SR-LATN-RS style='font-family:"Roboto Light";color:black'>ICANN Board of Directors member</span><span lang=SR-LATN-RS style='font-family:"Roboto Light"'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='background:white'><i><span lang=EN-GB style='font-family:"Roboto Light";color:black'><img width=55 height=55 style='width:.5763in;height:.5763in' id="Picture_x0020_5" src="cid:image001.png@01D6F3BC.BF5B6F10"></span></i><span lang=SR-LATN-RS style='font-family:"Roboto Light"'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='background:white'><span lang=SR-LATN-RS style='font-family:"Roboto Light";color:black'><a href="mailto:danko.jevtovic@board.icann.org">danko.jevtovic@board.icann.org</a> </span><span lang=SR-LATN-RS style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Roboto Light";color:black'><a href="https://www.icann.org/resources/pages/board-of-directors">www.icann.org</a></span><span lang=SR-LATN-RS style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Roboto Light"'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='background:white'><span lang=SR-LATN-RS style='font-family:"Roboto Light";color:navy'><a href="https://www.linkedin.com/in/dankoj">linkedin.com/in/dankoj</a> </span><span lang=SR-LATN-RS style='font-family:"Roboto Light";color:black'><a href="https://twitter.com/dankoj" target="_blank">twitter.com/dankoj</a> </span><span lang=SR-LATN-RS style='font-family:"Roboto Light"'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='background:white'><span lang=SR-LATN-RS style='font-family:"Roboto Light";color:black'>mobile: +381-65-3496666 </span><span lang=SR-LATN-RS style='font-family:"Roboto Light";color:black'>Skype:<a href="callto:dankoj" target="_blank">callto:dankoj</a></span><span lang=SR-LATN-RS style='font-family:"Roboto Light"'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='background:white'><span lang=SR-LATN-RS style='font-family:"Roboto Light"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=SR-LATN-RS style='font-family:"Roboto Light"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b>From:</b> Ssr2-review <ssr2-review-bounces@icann.org> <b>On Behalf Of </b>Jennifer Bryce<br><b>Sent:</b> Friday, January 22, 2021 11:16 PM<br><b>To:</b> Heather Flanagan <hlf@sphericalcowconsulting.com>; Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>; Barrett, Kerry-Ann <KABarrett@oas.org><br><b>Cc:</b> ICANN SSR2 <ssr2-review@icann.org><br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [Ssr2-review] [Ext] Re: For Review: SSR2 Final Report<o:p></o:p></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB>Hi all,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB>The updated clean PDF is attached, which incorporates the comments to date from Heather, Kerry-Ann, and Russ. If there are no other comments over the weekend this version will go to the Board on Monday.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB>Have a great weekend everyone.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB>Best,<br>Jennifer<o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB>-- <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#A6A6A6'>Jennifer Bryce<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#A6A6A6'>Project Manager, Review Support and Accountability<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#A6A6A6'>Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#A6A6A6'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#A6A6A6'>Skype: jennifer.bryce.icann<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#A6A6A6'>Email: <a href="mailto:jennifer.bryce@icann.org">jennifer.bryce@icann.org</a><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:12.0pt;color:black'>From: </span></b><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:12.0pt;color:black'>Heather Flanagan <<a href="mailto:hlf@sphericalcowconsulting.com">hlf@sphericalcowconsulting.com</a>><br><b>Date: </b>Friday, 22 January 2021 at 12:09<br><b>To: </b>Jennifer Bryce <<a href="mailto:jennifer.bryce@icann.org">jennifer.bryce@icann.org</a>>, Russ Housley <<a href="mailto:housley@vigilsec.com">housley@vigilsec.com</a>>, "Barrett, Kerry-Ann" <<a href="mailto:KABarrett@oas.org">KABarrett@oas.org</a>><br><b>Cc: </b>ICANN SSR2 <<a href="mailto:ssr2-review@icann.org">ssr2-review@icann.org</a>><br><b>Subject: </b>RE: [Ssr2-review] [Ext] Re: For Review: SSR2 Final Report<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><div name=messageBodySection><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-family:"Montserrat",serif'>HI Kerry-Ann,</span><span lang=EN-GB><br><br></span><span lang=EN-GB style='font-family:"Montserrat",serif'>Thank you for the thorough review! I agree that I somehow missed the legacy language in 8, 10, and 13. I do think that the extended context around that language in 9 and 15 suggests they should be left as they are.</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><div name=messageSignatureSection><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-family:"Montserrat",serif'>Heather Flanagan — Translator of Geek to Human</span><span lang=EN-GB><br><a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/sphericalcowconsulting.com__;!!PtGJab4!vSP0wwzus43qfxL7ycJwtZi8FJl9oT3gW8Ua34lJGjUJir0i8CV6doEKOVXQZlWQRE1vAu_G6w$" target="_blank"><span style='font-family:"Montserrat",serif'>https://sphericalcowconsulting.com [sphericalcowconsulting.com]</span></a><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><div name=messageReplySection><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><span lang=EN-GB>On Jan 22, 2021, 8:27 AM -0800, Barrett, Kerry-Ann <<a href="mailto:KABarrett@oas.org">KABarrett@oas.org</a>>, wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p><blockquote style='border:none;border-left:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt;margin-left:3.75pt;margin-top:3.75pt;margin-right:3.75pt;margin-bottom:3.75pt'><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB style='color:#1F497D'>Dear Jen</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB style='color:#1F497D'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB style='color:#1F497D'>Copied in Heather just to check on something. Recs. 8.1, 9, 10, 13 and 15 – still have the legacy language similar to ‘This recommendation requires action from ICANN Board and ICANN Org.’</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB style='color:#1F497D'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB style='color:#1F497D'>Aside from those we can do a last scan but I picked up on those.</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB style='color:#1F497D'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB style='color:#1F497D'>Thanks</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB style='color:#1F497D'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><table class=MsoNormalTable border=0 cellspacing=0 cellpadding=0 width=720 style='width:540.0pt;margin-left:4.2pt'><tr><td width=110 valign=top style='width:82.5pt;padding:4.2pt 4.2pt 4.2pt 4.2pt'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__http:/www.oas.org/__;!!PtGJab4!vSP0wwzus43qfxL7ycJwtZi8FJl9oT3gW8Ua34lJGjUJir0i8CV6doEKOVXQZlWQRE3pO4ePkQ$"><span style='border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm;text-decoration:none'><img border=0 width=106 height=137 style='width:1.1041in;height:1.4305in' id="_x0000_i1028" src="cid:~WRD0003.jpg" alt="Image removed by sender. 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[oas.us11.list-manage.com]</a></span></u></b><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='color:black'> </span><o:p></o:p></p></td></tr></table><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB style='color:#1F497D'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB style='color:#1F497D'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><b><span lang=EN-GB>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-GB> Ssr2-review [<a href="mailto:ssr2-review-bounces@icann.org">mailto:ssr2-review-bounces@icann.org</a>] <b>On Behalf Of</b> Jennifer Bryce<br><b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, January 20, 2021 6:10 PM<br><b>To:</b> Russ Housley <<a href="mailto:housley@vigilsec.com">housley@vigilsec.com</a>><br><b>Cc:</b> ICANN SSR2 <<a href="mailto:ssr2-review@icann.org">ssr2-review@icann.org</a>><br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [Ssr2-review] [Ext] Re: For Review: SSR2 Final Report<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p><div style='border:solid #9C6500 1.0pt;padding:2.0pt 2.0pt 2.0pt 2.0pt'><h1 style='line-height:12.0pt;background:#FFEB9C'><strong><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:red'>CAUTION: EXTERNAL SENDER</span></strong><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></h1></div><pre><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></pre><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>Hi Russ,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>Thanks for the review and revised wording. I’ll incorporate this adjustment unless other RT members comment. Regarding your questions:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>1) Regarding "Emergency Back-end Registry Operator (EBERO)", should it be Back-End to match the capitalization in the acronym? – <span style='color:red'>Comms pointed me to this page, which is the usage they are following: <a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/www.icann.org/resources/pages/ebero-2013-04-02-en__;!!PtGJab4!vSP0wwzus43qfxL7ycJwtZi8FJl9oT3gW8Ua34lJGjUJir0i8CV6doEKOVXQZlWQRE3PFsX0fg$">https://www.icann.org/resources/pages/ebero-2013-04-02-en [icann.org]</a></span><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>2) Will Table 1 be scaled down to fit the page width? <span style='color:red'>See p19 for how it looks in PDF format. </span><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>Best,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>Jennifer<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>-- <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB style='color:#A6A6A6'>Jennifer Bryce</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB style='color:#A6A6A6'>Project Manager, Review Support and Accountability</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB style='color:#A6A6A6'>Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB style='color:#A6A6A6'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB style='color:#A6A6A6'>Skype: jennifer.bryce.icann</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB style='color:#A6A6A6'>Email: <a href="mailto:jennifer.bryce@icann.org">jennifer.bryce@icann.org</a></span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><b><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:12.0pt;color:black'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-GB> </span><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:12.0pt;color:black'>Russ Housley <<a href="mailto:housley@vigilsec.com">housley@vigilsec.com</a>><br><b>Date:</b> Wednesday, 20 January 2021 at 12:27<br><b>To:</b> Jennifer Bryce <<a href="mailto:jennifer.bryce@icann.org">jennifer.bryce@icann.org</a>><br><b>Cc:</b> ICANN SSR2 <<a href="mailto:ssr2-review@icann.org">ssr2-review@icann.org</a>><br><b>Subject:</b> [Ext] Re: [Ssr2-review] For Review: SSR2 Final Report</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>I reviewed the redlines. Something is wrong with the wording starting on page 52 for two or three pages. In the attachment, I offer corrections.<o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>I also have two questions:<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>1) Regarding "Emergency Back-end Registry Operator (EBERO)", should it be Back-End to match the capitalization in the acronym?<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>2) Will Table 1 be scaled down to fit the page width?<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>Russ<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-bottom:12.0pt'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p><blockquote style='margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt'><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>On Jan 20, 2021, at 2:46 PM, Jennifer Bryce <<a href="mailto:jennifer.bryce@icann.org">jennifer.bryce@icann.org</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>Dear SSR2 Review Team members,<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><b><span lang=EN-GB>For your review by 17:00 UTC on Friday 22 January:</span></b><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><b><span lang=EN-GB> </span></b><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>Attached, please find the final report in the template. This version incorporates edits from the comms proofing. You can see the changes in the redline version attached. Please let me know if you see anything that hasn’t translated to the template properly, or anything amiss in the proofing.<span class=xapple-converted-space> </span><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>After the Friday deadline I will work with Russ to get the report submitted to the Board. Thanks in advance for taking the time to review this final, proofed version.<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>FYI – the final report will be translated into the 5 UN languages. I’ll share these with the team once they are available.<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>Best,<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>Jennifer<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB>-- <o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB style='color:#A6A6A6'>Jennifer Bryce</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB style='color:#A6A6A6'>Project Manager, Review Support and Accountability</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-GB style='color:#A6A6A6'>Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div></div></div></div></blockquote></div></div></div></div></blockquote></div></div></body></html>