[tz] [PROPOSED 1/5] * tz-link.html: Minor tweaks to citations.

Paul Eggert eggert at cs.ucla.edu
Sun Nov 19 21:30:11 UTC 2023


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@@ -994,9 +994,9 @@ are larger for countries farther away from the equator, while
 subtropical regions consume more electricity because of <abbr>DST</abbr>."</li>
 <li>Malow BA. It is time to abolish the clock change and adopt permanent
 standard time in the United States: a Sleep Research Society position statement.
-<em>Sleep</em>. 2022;45(12):zsac236.
+<em>Sleep.</em> 2022;45(12):zsac236.
 doi:<a href="https://doi.org/10.1093/sleep/zsac236">10.1093/sleep/zsac236</a>.
-After reviewing of the scientific literature, the Sleep Research Society
+After reviewing the scientific literature, the Sleep Research Society
 advocates permanent standard time due to its health benefits.
 <li>Rishi MA, Cheng JY, Strang AR <em>et al</em>.
 <a href="https://jcsm.aasm.org/doi/10.5664/jcsm.10898">Permanent standard time
@@ -1004,15 +1004,15 @@ is the optimal choice for health and safety:
 an American Academy of Sleep Medicine position statement</a>.
 <em>J Clin Sleep Med.</em> 2023-10-31.
 doi:<a href="https://doi.org/10.5664/jcsm.10898">10.5664/jcsm.10898</a>.
-This argues for permanent standard time due to health and safety risks
+The AASM argues for permanent standard time due to health and safety risks
 and economic costs of both <abbr>DST</abbr> transitions and
 permanent <abbr>DST</abbr>.</li>
 <li>Roenneberg T, Wirz-Justice A, Skene DJ <em>et al</em>.
 <a href="https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC7205184/">Why
 should we abolish Daylight Saving Time?</a>
-<em>J Biol Rhythms</em>. 2019;34(3):227–230.
+<em>J Biol Rhythms.</em> 2019;34(3):227–230.
 doi:<a href="https://doi.org/10.1177/0748730419854197">10.1177/0748730419854197</a>.
-This position paper of the Society for Research on Biological Rhythms
+The Society for Research on Biological Rhythms
 opposes DST changes and permanent DST, and advocates that governments adopt
 "permanent Standard Time for the health and safety of their citizens".</li>
 </ul>
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