[UA-discuss] UA Fact Sheet

[Ram Mohan]

I like all of your edits Mark.





*From:* Mark Svancarek [mailto:marksv at microsoft.com]
*Sent:* Monday, October 05, 2015 6:48 PM
*To:* Ram Mohan <rmohan at afilias.info>; Don Hollander <
don.hollander at icann.org>; Tan Tanaka, Dennis <dtantanaka at verisign.com>;
Brent London <brentlondon at google.com>; Carolyn Nguyen (LCA) <
Carolyn.Nguyen at microsoft.com>; Christian Dawson <dawson at i2coalition.com>;
Richard Merdinger <rmerdinger at godaddy.com>; kurt at kjpritz.com;
judy.song at neustar.biz
*Cc:* UA-discuss at icann.org
*Subject:* RE: UA Fact Sheet



I’ve added more updates.



*From:* Ram Mohan [mailto:rmohan at afilias.info <rmohan at afilias.info>]
*Sent:* Monday, October 5, 2015 1:44 PM
*To:* Mark Svancarek; Don Hollander; Tan Tanaka, Dennis; Brent London;
Carolyn Nguyen (LCA); Christian Dawson; Richard Merdinger; kurt at kjpritz.com;
judy.song at neustar.biz
*Cc:* UA-discuss at icann.org
*Subject:* RE: UA Fact Sheet



I made extensive edits on top of Mark’s changes.



I’m cc’ing the full UASG distro, it’s useful to get more eyes on this.



-Ram



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*From:* Mark Svancarek [mailto:marksv at microsoft.com]
*Sent:* Monday, October 05, 2015 1:00 PM
*To:* Don Hollander <don.hollander at icann.org>; Ram Mohan <
rmohan at afilias.info>; Tan Tanaka, Dennis <dtantanaka at verisign.com>; Brent
London <brentlondon at google.com>; Carolyn Nguyen (LCA) <
Carolyn.Nguyen at microsoft.com>; Christian Dawson <dawson at i2coalition.com>;
Richard Merdinger <rmerdinger at godaddy.com>; kurt at kjpritz.com;
judy.song at neustar.biz
*Subject:* RE: UA Fact Sheet



My edits and comments are in the document.  I’m not seeing my own
redlining, so hopefully y’all will be able to see what I changed.



I do think it’s clear enough right now [as edited by me ;-) ].



/marksv



*From:* Don Hollander [mailto:don.hollander at icann.org
<don.hollander at icann.org>]
*Sent:* Monday, October 5, 2015 12:08 AM
*To:* Ram Mohan; Tan Tanaka, Dennis; Brent London; Carolyn Nguyen (LCA);
Mark Svancarek; Christian Dawson; Richard Merdinger; kurt at kjpritz.com;
judy.song at neustar.biz
*Subject:* UA Fact Sheet



https://docs.google.com/document/d/1a_Agj-CLwM3E0CU-D2tKYCUPtPvNKKvIDKp3fle6EQ8/edit
<https://na01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3a%2f%2fdocs.google.com%2fdocument%2fd%2f1a_Agj-CLwM3E0CU-D2tKYCUPtPvNKKvIDKp3fle6EQ8%2fedit&data=01%7c01%7cmarksv%40microsoft.com%7cd092604126d94a9414de08d2cdc5dbcc%7c72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7c1&sdata=ZL7Gsn7hMQyjvCFnOreoLMCBa3mBVBggo0KOgMKfVwA%3d>



The above link refers.



We have been working to get this document ready for some weeks now.  We
took the original text that was used during the ICANN meeting in Toronto
and have been massaging it.



There’s still no clarity and precious little time left to a) format it and
b) print it.   But, I think it may still be possible.



Your prompt review and, if necessary, revision would be very welcome.



Once this is done, then we can also work to get it prepared for the IGF -
including getting some translation done.



Thanks so much.



Don





PS: This distribution list includes those who have contributed comments as
well as those who volunteered to review UASG documentation.
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