<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class="">As do I.<div class=""><br class=""><div><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Oct 5, 2015, at 6:51 PM, Ram Mohan <<a href="mailto:rmohan@afilias.info" class="">rmohan@afilias.info</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div class="WordSection1" style="page: WordSection1; font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;"><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">I like all of your edits Mark.</span></div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""> </span></p><div class=""><div style="border-style: solid none none; border-top-color: rgb(225, 225, 225); border-top-width: 1pt; padding: 3pt 0in 0in;" class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><b class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">From:</span></b><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Mark Svancarek [mailto:<a href="mailto:marksv@microsoft.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">marksv@microsoft.com</a>]<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br class=""><b class="">Sent:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Monday, October 05, 2015 6:48 PM<br class=""><b class="">To:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Ram Mohan <<a href="mailto:rmohan@afilias.info" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">rmohan@afilias.info</a>>; Don Hollander <<a href="mailto:don.hollander@icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">don.hollander@icann.org</a>>; Tan Tanaka, Dennis <<a href="mailto:dtantanaka@verisign.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">dtantanaka@verisign.com</a>>; Brent London <<a href="mailto:brentlondon@google.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">brentlondon@google.com</a>>; Carolyn Nguyen (LCA) <<a href="mailto:Carolyn.Nguyen@microsoft.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">Carolyn.Nguyen@microsoft.com</a>>; Christian Dawson <<a href="mailto:dawson@i2coalition.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">dawson@i2coalition.com</a>>; Richard Merdinger <<a href="mailto:rmerdinger@godaddy.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">rmerdinger@godaddy.com</a>>;<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:kurt@kjpritz.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">kurt@kjpritz.com</a>;<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:judy.song@neustar.biz" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">judy.song@neustar.biz</a><br class=""><b class="">Cc:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:UA-discuss@icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">UA-discuss@icann.org</a><br class=""><b class="">Subject:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>RE: UA Fact Sheet</span></div></div></div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"> </p><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">I’ve added more updates.</span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><a name="_MailEndCompose" class=""></a><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""> </span></div><div class=""><div style="border-style: solid none none; border-top-color: rgb(225, 225, 225); border-top-width: 1pt; padding: 3pt 0in 0in;" class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><b class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">From:</span></b><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Ram Mohan [<a href="mailto:rmohan@afilias.info" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">mailto:rmohan@afilias.info</a>]<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br class=""><b class="">Sent:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Monday, October 5, 2015 1:44 PM<br class=""><b class="">To:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Mark Svancarek; Don Hollander; Tan Tanaka, Dennis; Brent London; Carolyn Nguyen (LCA); Christian Dawson; Richard Merdinger;<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:kurt@kjpritz.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">kurt@kjpritz.com</a>;<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:judy.song@neustar.biz" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">judy.song@neustar.biz</a><br class=""><b class="">Cc:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:UA-discuss@icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">UA-discuss@icann.org</a><br class=""><b class="">Subject:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>RE: UA Fact Sheet</span></div></div></div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"> </p><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">I made extensive edits on top of Mark’s changes.</span></div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""> </span></p><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">I’m cc’ing the full UASG distro, it’s useful to get more eyes on this.</span></div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""> </span></p><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">-Ram</span></div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""> </span></p><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">------------------------------------------------------------------------------</span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">Ram Mohan</span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">o: +1.215.706.5700 x103; m: +1.215.431.0958; f: +1.215.706.5701</span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">Skype: gliderpilot30</span></div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""> </span></p></div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""> </span></p><div class=""><div style="border-style: solid none none; border-top-color: rgb(225, 225, 225); border-top-width: 1pt; padding: 3pt 0in 0in;" class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><b class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">From:</span></b><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Mark Svancarek [mailto:<a href="mailto:marksv@microsoft.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">marksv@microsoft.com</a>]<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br class=""><b class="">Sent:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Monday, October 05, 2015 1:00 PM<br class=""><b class="">To:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Don Hollander <<a href="mailto:don.hollander@icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">don.hollander@icann.org</a>>; Ram Mohan <<a href="mailto:rmohan@afilias.info" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">rmohan@afilias.info</a>>; Tan Tanaka, Dennis <<a href="mailto:dtantanaka@verisign.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">dtantanaka@verisign.com</a>>; Brent London <<a href="mailto:brentlondon@google.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">brentlondon@google.com</a>>; Carolyn Nguyen (LCA) <<a href="mailto:Carolyn.Nguyen@microsoft.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">Carolyn.Nguyen@microsoft.com</a>>; Christian Dawson <<a href="mailto:dawson@i2coalition.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">dawson@i2coalition.com</a>>; Richard Merdinger <<a href="mailto:rmerdinger@godaddy.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">rmerdinger@godaddy.com</a>>;<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:kurt@kjpritz.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">kurt@kjpritz.com</a>;<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:judy.song@neustar.biz" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">judy.song@neustar.biz</a><br class=""><b class="">Subject:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>RE: UA Fact Sheet</span></div></div></div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"> </p><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">My edits and comments are in the document. I’m not seeing my own redlining, so hopefully y’all will be able to see what I changed.</span></div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""> </span></p><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">I do think it’s clear enough right now [as edited by me ;-) ].</span></div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""> </span></p><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">/marksv</span></div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""> </span></p><div class=""><div style="border-style: solid none none; border-top-color: rgb(225, 225, 225); border-top-width: 1pt; padding: 3pt 0in 0in;" class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><b class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">From:</span></b><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Don Hollander [<a href="mailto:don.hollander@icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">mailto:don.hollander@icann.org</a>]<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br class=""><b class="">Sent:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Monday, October 5, 2015 12:08 AM<br class=""><b class="">To:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Ram Mohan; Tan Tanaka, Dennis; Brent London; Carolyn Nguyen (LCA); Mark Svancarek; Christian Dawson; Richard Merdinger;<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:kurt@kjpritz.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">kurt@kjpritz.com</a>;<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:judy.song@neustar.biz" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">judy.song@neustar.biz</a><br class=""><b class="">Subject:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>UA Fact Sheet</span></div></div></div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"> </p><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><a href="https://na01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3a%2f%2fdocs.google.com%2fdocument%2fd%2f1a_Agj-CLwM3E0CU-D2tKYCUPtPvNKKvIDKp3fle6EQ8%2fedit&data=01%7c01%7cmarksv%40microsoft.com%7cd092604126d94a9414de08d2cdc5dbcc%7c72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7c1&sdata=ZL7Gsn7hMQyjvCFnOreoLMCBa3mBVBggo0KOgMKfVwA%3d" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1a_Agj-CLwM3E0CU-D2tKYCUPtPvNKKvIDKp3fle6EQ8/edit</a></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"> </p></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class="">The above link refers.</div></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"> </p></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class="">We have been working to get this document ready for some weeks now. We took the original text that was used during the ICANN meeting in Toronto and have been massaging it.</div></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"> </p></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class="">There’s still no clarity and precious little time left to a) format it and b) print it. But, I think it may still be possible.</div></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"> </p></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class="">Your prompt review and, if necessary, revision would be very welcome.</div></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"> </p></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class="">Once this is done, then we can also work to get it prepared for the IGF - including getting some translation done.</div></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"> </p></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class="">Thanks so much.</div></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"> </p></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class="">Don</div></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"> </p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"> </p></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class="">PS: This distribution list includes those who have contributed comments as well as those who volunteered to review UASG documentation.</div></div></div></div></blockquote></div><br class=""></div></body></html>