[WP1] Fwd: First Draft: WP1 content for Comment report on community powers & AOC

[Mathieu Weill]

Hi Jordan, Colleagues,

I have reviewed the document and this is already a great step forward. I 
attach some comments in the document.

Best
Mathieu



Le 07/04/2015 01:51, Jordan Carter a écrit :
> Dear co-chairs,
>
> Please see attached - would welcome any feedback on the form and 
> approach in the material, length, level of detail, anything you like - 
> please feel welcome and I would encourage you to make any such 
> feedbacks on the list.
>
> *In terms of the lawyers - Leon*, can you formally communicate this to 
> the lawyers, and ask them to be ready to comment or add their thoughts 
> on the lists, or on the call on Wednesday?
>
> Given this document is fairly short we haven't focused down on key 
> questions to ask the lawyers, this will be familiar to most of them.
>
> The big outstanding question is the mechanism, and having no answer on 
> that will limit what they can say, I would think.
>
> cheers,
> Jordan
>
> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
> From: *Jordan Carter* <jordan at internetnz.net.nz 
> <mailto:jordan at internetnz.net.nz>>
> Date: 7 April 2015 at 11:48
> Subject: First Draft: WP1 content for Comment report on community 
> powers & AOC
> To: "wp1 at icann.org <mailto:wp1 at icann.org>" <wp1 at icann.org 
> <mailto:wp1 at icann.org>>
>
>
> Dear WP1 colleagues,
>
> Attached in PDF and .docx the first draft of the content we have 
> prepared over the weekend to put in the Public Comment report.
>
> It covers community powers and AOC incorporation.
>
> Of course this is not yet perfect - we've done what we can in the very 
> tight timeframe to get first draft material together. Thanks to those 
> drafting team members who were able to set some time aside and add 
> comments and thoughts to the draft. Not everybody had the chance to 
> due to some document access issues, so I am sure our next iteration 
> will be even better.
>
> This will be the main subject of our WP1 call on 8 April.
>
> *I would welcome and encourage comment or discussion on the list 
> before the meeting, as well as at the meeting.* We won't prepare an 
> updated version of this until after the WP1 call Wednesday, which will 
> take the discussion on the call into account.
>
> I will send this to the co-chairs and asking Leon to advance 
> discussion / consideration with the lawyers.
>
>
> *Staff - *please add this on the Wiki in the appropriate place.
>
>
> cheers,
> Jordan
>
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> Jordan Carter
>
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