[WP1] First Draft: WP1 content for Comment report on community powers & AOC

[Samantha Eisner]

Dear Colleagues,

There has been an impressive amount of work put into this document - the sprint is clearly running at a fast pace!  In advance of the WP1 meeting tomorrow, I've provided some proposed edits and comment on the body of the document.  For want of time, I did not include any comments on the appendices.

Please let me know if you have questions.

Best,

Sam

From: Jordan Carter <jordan at internetnz.net.nz<mailto:jordan at internetnz.net.nz>>
Date: Monday, April 6, 2015 at 4:48 PM
To: "wp1 at icann.org<mailto:wp1 at icann.org>" <wp1 at icann.org<mailto:wp1 at icann.org>>
Subject: [WP1] First Draft: WP1 content for Comment report on community powers & AOC

Dear WP1 colleagues,

Attached in PDF and .docx the first draft of the content we have prepared over the weekend to put in the Public Comment report.

It covers community powers and AOC incorporation.

Of course this is not yet perfect - we've done what we can in the very tight timeframe to get first draft material together. Thanks to those drafting team members who were able to set some time aside and add comments and thoughts to the draft. Not everybody had the chance to due to some document access issues, so I am sure our next iteration will be even better.

This will be the main subject of our WP1 call on 8 April.

I would welcome and encourage comment or discussion on the list before the meeting, as well as at the meeting. We won't prepare an updated version of this until after the WP1 call Wednesday, which will take the discussion on the call into account.

I will send this to the co-chairs and asking Leon to advance discussion / consideration with the lawyers.


Staff - please add this on the Wiki in the appropriate place.


cheers,
Jordan

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