[WP1] v2 of comment document for WP1

[Jordan Carter]

Hi all

Attached in .docx and .pdf the second draft of this content for the comment
report.

Thanks to all those who helped with the drafting, particularly Steve who
did a lot of heavy lifting.

My apologies for any comments I have missed.

Red-line follows shortly.

cheers
Jordan

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