[WP1] Content Draft with Comments and Tracked Changes - next (Final) draft out 0300 Friday UTC

[Robin Gross]

Thanks, Jordan. 

Can you note in p.2 in the comments regarding the relative weight in these decisions that the below is my proposal?  Thank you!

"Proposal is that SOs have double representation to ACs.  This is in keeping with the board seat distribution and also with ICANN remaining rooted in the private sector."   

The rest looks good to me.  Thanks for your quick work on this.

Best,
Robin


On Apr 16, 2015, at 2:10 PM, Jordan Carter wrote:

> Hi eveyone
> 
> Thanks for the call just now.
> 
> Attached is the working document.
> 
> Please review if you are inclined. If you have specific comments please raise them ON THE LIST rather than just to me, so anyone else can react, and I will take into account any comments on THIS version received by 0200 UTC on Friday.
> 
> I will take these comments, clean the document up, do what I can in the time available to add things like the tables / options for votes, and then...
> 
> ... and then circulate a nice clean Final Draft for you (and a mark up showing what has changed from V3) at around 0300 UTC on Friday.
> 
> Then you will have 21h to make any final comments or thoughts.
> 
> Then, I'll make final adjustments and send it to the co-chairs and staff, or wherever they tell us to send it, for incorporation in the full document.
> 
> This isn't perfect work folks, but it's pretty darn good given the pace at which we are working.  Thank you for all the effort represented here.
> 
> cheers
> Jordan
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