[WP1] next steps.. weekend work on WP1 papers

[Jordan Carter]

Hi all

The lawyers have been sent a pack of documents for review over the weekend
which have been temporarily frozen for that purpose.

That means there is little point in me doing any editing work on docs that
will come back with edits and tracked changes from legal, where significant
changes aren't needed.

That means this weekend I won't do any work on the following:
- Community Mechanism description
- Fundamental Bylaws
- Standard Bylaws


As a result, and starting later than hoped, my plan today is to get out
just the following:

- some new text on the *ICANN Community Forum* for us to kick around


*Tomorrow*, I plan to work on the following:

- the ICANN Budget paper - will be *heavily revised*
- an updated section on *voting weights* in the Community Mechanism
- a *new* section introducing the Community Powers

Also, even though there are docs on these with the lawyers, I'll work off
the drafts that went to the lawyers and do some updates from our last
call/s (WP1 and CCWG) to the following:

- updates on Recalling the ICANN Board
- updates on Removing Individual ICANN Directors

I'll track changes on the last two against the documents that were sent to
the lawyers, some of which aren't the latest documents, to make the
comparison between what the lawyers come back with & these documents as
simple as possible.


cheers
Jordan


On 24 July 2015 at 17:49, Jordan Carter <jordan at internetnz.net.nz> wrote:

> Hi all
>
> I'm planning to spend most of tomorrow on WP1 documentation and matters.
> The first thing you can expect from me is a chart that shows what work is
> planned for the weekend on my part.
>
> My intended approach, to save you all work, is to revise and review
> documents based on this week's conversations, and then to send them to the
> WP1 list for review. The covering email, and a box at the front of the doc,
> will have critical unresolved issues set out for easy consideration.
>
> What would be really, really helpful is for you to read these emails and
> reply as you go.
>
> I'll start around 11am tomorrow NZ Time - 23h UTC on Friday.
>
> My intention is to do this for:
>
> - the four outstanding Powers (the fifth, fundamental bylaws seems pretty
> sorted)
> - the community mechanism description
> - the community mechanism - ICANN Community Forum description
> - the community mechanism - voting weights etc
>
> I'll just send out each paper on the list as I get it done.
>
>
> Now, if you want to be in the loop for earlier drafting or to discuss
> issues, I'd like to use Skype if possible to have an ongoing group chat
> about each paper.
>
> So if you add me on Skype at jordancarter, and/or email your contact
> details with your desire to be involved, I can set up some group chats to
> share the discussion.
>
> Of course, any comments you add on email before I kick off tomorrow, and
> I'll take those into account.
>
>
> Thanks
> Jordan
>
>
>
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